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the late late poem
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once while I
slept his mouth
played riddles in
the well of my being
impossible riddles
without answers
night time taunts
licked my thin
self-esteem
until i
opened up
later,
while scribbling on the web
i come
*
once while I
slept his mouth
played riddles in
the well of my being
impossible riddles
without answers
night time taunts
licked my thin
self-esteem
until i
opened up
later,
while scribbling on the web
i come
*
Published 1st Sep 2015
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1st Sep 2015 11:08pm
burned body of god [!] i am at a loss for words here, miss shauna... the intricacies of your wordweb seem to have snared my own...
"his mouth
played riddles in
the well of my being"
... your mind is an exquisite place indeed, i am enamoured by its turns [of phrase]
*
does it get any more orgasmic than this? i am positively breathless, sated by this sapiosexual feast
brava brava, bella
xoxox
~ k
"his mouth
played riddles in
the well of my being"
... your mind is an exquisite place indeed, i am enamoured by its turns [of phrase]
*
does it get any more orgasmic than this? i am positively breathless, sated by this sapiosexual feast
brava brava, bella
xoxox
~ k
1st Sep 2015 11:22pm
beautiful Shauna I struggle to decipher your poetic genius..
though this part really resonates within me..
"impossible riddles
without answers
night time taunts
licked my thin
self-esteem
until i
opened up"
breathtaking poetry so much heart you have..
with love Brenda
though this part really resonates within me..
"impossible riddles
without answers
night time taunts
licked my thin
self-esteem
until i
opened up"
breathtaking poetry so much heart you have..
with love Brenda
1st Sep 2015 11:24pm
Hey Shadoe. To say thank you is so small -the way you critiqued this pop poem of mine. I'm writing from experience here so the poem just slipped out on her own.
And yes sapiosexuals rule!!!
And yes sapiosexuals rule!!!
2nd Sep 2015 00:14am
Brenda...please, I sure you get the bones of most of my poems. You are so good to support me with your comments. Thank you!
2nd Sep 2015 3:36am
devotion to the wetness of dreams & to making poems abt them. reaching the unreachable star...
2nd Sep 2015 4:54pm
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2nd Sep 2015 5:43pm
your genius is otherworldly, im just a beginner so im still learning and learning to comprehend, but the intangible (and tangible) aspects to your poems are cosmic... a galaxy of feelings, you are a superstar
3rd Sep 2015 00:46am
Hey Dean, you are making my night for sure! Thank you, you're the best. Because I read so much poetry in junior high my love for words increases the older I get.
