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Cool Down
Stay and lay with me,
after we play.
Just need to know...
need to hear you say;
That you long for me
as much as my body.
I love to share myself
with you;
But I love to talk
and cuddle too.
Just to see my reflection
in your eyes;
Makes my heart,
pound deep sighs.
Just to see you smile
as we lie together awhile.
Sometime just to
watch you sleep.
These are the cherished
memories I keep.
I love more to love you,
than to make love....
This is TRUE.
after we play.
Just need to know...
need to hear you say;
That you long for me
as much as my body.
I love to share myself
with you;
But I love to talk
and cuddle too.
Just to see my reflection
in your eyes;
Makes my heart,
pound deep sighs.
Just to see you smile
as we lie together awhile.
Sometime just to
watch you sleep.
These are the cherished
memories I keep.
I love more to love you,
than to make love....
This is TRUE.
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Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 3:25am
"need to hear you say;
That you long for me
as much as my body. "
Priceless sentiment. I can relate to that need really well.
"
I love more to love you,
than to make love.... "
And that should be true of any relationship. Unfortunately we probably all know it rarely is. Heart warming to see such beautiful thoughts out there tonight, Keith. Glad to see this one. :)
Michael
That you long for me
as much as my body. "
Priceless sentiment. I can relate to that need really well.
"
I love more to love you,
than to make love.... "
And that should be true of any relationship. Unfortunately we probably all know it rarely is. Heart warming to see such beautiful thoughts out there tonight, Keith. Glad to see this one. :)
Michael
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Re: Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 7:17am
Michael, does it bother you a little when
members the fairer sex questions our sincerity?
We really are able to love and share our emotions,
I just find it funny that we are somehow trying to pull
the wool over their eyes. I am so glad you stopped
by.
Keith
members the fairer sex questions our sincerity?
We really are able to love and share our emotions,
I just find it funny that we are somehow trying to pull
the wool over their eyes. I am so glad you stopped
by.
Keith
Re: Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 6:46pm
Yes it does bother me, though I have grown accustomed to it sadly. To have the loyalty which has always been so big a part of me questioned hurts more than anything...hollows the soul. Yet that is what has come with our societal changes this day and age. I truly was born way beyond my time I think. It is definitely nice to see someone else who has similiar feelings on this matter. If only I could find a woman with such an outlook.
Michael
Michael
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Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 4:11am
"Just to see my reflection
in your eyes;
Makes my heart,
pound deep sighs."
~the ultimate soft spot. you nailed it!
"I love more to love you,
than to make love.... "
~precious statement.. perfect end..
My, my.. you are in a rare form of sweetness tonight..
pure sentiments here, that I hope are attained & shower you eternally..
shiny nite-blessins Keith ;)
~d
in your eyes;
Makes my heart,
pound deep sighs."
~the ultimate soft spot. you nailed it!
"I love more to love you,
than to make love.... "
~precious statement.. perfect end..
My, my.. you are in a rare form of sweetness tonight..
pure sentiments here, that I hope are attained & shower you eternally..
shiny nite-blessins Keith ;)
~d
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Re: Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 7:36am
I am graced by you presence Sweet Lady, I am glad you liked.
I am not really myself tonight>am I? Not any back and forth on
this love thing>kinda positive? I am so glad that you liked the line>
" I love more to love you than to make love"
It was a subject of disagreement,
I am glad you agreed
nite
Keith
I am not really myself tonight>am I? Not any back and forth on
this love thing>kinda positive? I am so glad that you liked the line>
" I love more to love you than to make love"
It was a subject of disagreement,
I am glad you agreed
nite
Keith
Re: Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 7:39am
Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting.
Look forward to reading you.
Look forward to reading you.
Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 4:41am
Sweetie, how nice.
I love more to love you,
than to make love....
This is TRUE.
A real man says these things, and feels them. So often its bragadocio, and leave em. This is refreshing, well written, and makes me dig you even more than i already do!
Grinning
🌹Jen
I love more to love you,
than to make love....
This is TRUE.
A real man says these things, and feels them. So often its bragadocio, and leave em. This is refreshing, well written, and makes me dig you even more than i already do!
Grinning
🌹Jen
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Re: Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 7:10am
thanks Jen for commenting.
I have a friend who reads everything
before I post it. She is my muse/ sounding board/ editor
prob bf and she questioned that line.
But kept it that way anyway.
so glad you agreed.
because that is exactly the way it was meant>truly feel
Keith
I have a friend who reads everything
before I post it. She is my muse/ sounding board/ editor
prob bf and she questioned that line.
But kept it that way anyway.
so glad you agreed.
because that is exactly the way it was meant>truly feel
Keith
Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 12:23pm
I love seeing your softer side. I wish all males would pocket their man cards every once in awhile! Loved it Keith! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Cool Down
6th Sep 2015 9:05pm
Sweet Sissy, I was never issued a
Man card, so there was no need for me to pocket. We males love as you
wen do. Sometimes just have to look
and listen a little more. Thanks for
the read love.
Keith
Man card, so there was no need for me to pocket. We males love as you
wen do. Sometimes just have to look
and listen a little more. Thanks for
the read love.
Keith
Re. Cool Down
1st Sep 2015 6:01pm
Truly a lovely romantic write. It makes one yearn for that closeness, to be loved in every way. Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful.
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Re: Re. Cool Down
6th Sep 2015 9:09pm
Thanks for the sweet comment
Ms Looloolookie . As sweet as you
are I know
You will find what you desire .
Ms Looloolookie . As sweet as you
are I know
You will find what you desire .
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6th Sep 2015 9:10pm
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2015 8:41am
Warming piece Keith. Like you wrote it into the pillow.
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Re: Re. Cool Down
6th Sep 2015 9:14pm
Thank you Derrick for you
kind and warm words,
I am glad to see you
again,
Keith
kind and warm words,
I am glad to see you
again,
Keith