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stay
*
stop
please don't
make me feel
your hands all night
knitting promises I long to feel
the way you tell me you want to own me
a tongue that seduces relentlessy
weakens me
I come
stay
*
stop
please don't
make me feel
your hands all night
knitting promises I long to feel
the way you tell me you want to own me
a tongue that seduces relentlessy
weakens me
I come
stay
*
Published 30th Aug 2015
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30th Aug 2015 1:02am
30th Aug 2015 1:06am
Anonymous
30th Aug 2015 1:35am
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30th Aug 2015 2:05am
"Knitting promises I long to feel;" prob my fav line ever. Visual pleasing and beautifully written;
So much with so little; girl you
Definitely have it all
Keith
So much with so little; girl you
Definitely have it all
Keith
30th Aug 2015 6:49am
30th Aug 2015 9:33am
Stop dont stay
We have crazy ways us chicks
Crazy ways we like to play
Fav word here, use of "knitting"
🚬💋J. Another 🔥piece
We have crazy ways us chicks
Crazy ways we like to play
Fav word here, use of "knitting"
🚬💋J. Another 🔥piece
30th Aug 2015 5:44pm
30th Aug 2015 5:44pm
30th Aug 2015 5:44pm
30th Aug 2015 5:45pm
30th Aug 2015 5:46pm
30th Aug 2015 5:47pm
hey there J. yes...men and woman can be a tad dizzy when it come to the flesh. TY
4th Sep 2015 1:33am
beautifully written shakka... your words flow wonderfully in this unique structure... i like
