unassuming Ohm...

A lot of Depth to
these two lines.

...be still and know
the naked surface.

Be still, (quiet; at rest;
within let all Your own
thoughts, preconceptions,
ideas subside and just Be).

  Enjoyed... Dantalian

You’ve pegged it.  I hate the name but could think of nothing so I changed it.  But yes, you really got the feeling for the deeper wisdom of the now.  Thank you.  Have an excellent day.

thoughtful and rhythmic
and light on its feet :)

I do love the sound of that. :)  Thank you.  It is a charm to have your ear.  

A lot of thoughts come to me when I read those two lines. I could probably sit here and write a paragraphs worth. But the "be still" resonates with me deeply.

You're a fantastic writer and I know it will be good.  Thank you for the comment.  

The word naked preceded by truth removes all clothing of pretense we are so accustomed to. Well done.

I wish I could express my appreciation more but no words come to mind.  Your wonderful insight.  :)  I truly thank all of you here for being so caring.  

succinct and so powerful Pisha...your poem does still me...a prayer I would read before going to bed.

Thank you so much.  :) Wonderful wonders the still mind ponders.

few words,
twinkling
lightly

You're a de light. :)

smooth...

 
Starry Sphere
 ....fixt in all her Wheels

Thank you always Hashman :)

i would call it unpretentious Ohm...or unassuming Ohm.....& i love this very much....i would love to absorb your silence :)

very perfect. :)

:D