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on sacrifice
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your eyes command me
to be still
quiet as a doe
as I face dawn
your mouth brands my throat
my shoulder, my breasts
you hold me tight as a corset
pushing deep inside me
ridge after swollen ridge
i feel your lips against my ears
whispering words that burn my
mind into tattered pieces
now, on my knees with my face
between your thighs
my wet lashes stroke you
you tell me this is where i belong
your scent is my oxygen
yet my breathing is shallow
the touch of leather
makes me tremble in fear and
anticipation...my lips part
my response excites you
i feel you smile into my hair
as you wrap my hair around your fist
this is how i show my love to you
accepting your dark desires
so vulnerable...
a wisp of wind, once holy
waits to fulfill any role you wish
ready to answer all your needs
one by one
i
love
you.
your eyes command me
to be still
quiet as a doe
as I face dawn
your mouth brands my throat
my shoulder, my breasts
you hold me tight as a corset
pushing deep inside me
ridge after swollen ridge
i feel your lips against my ears
whispering words that burn my
mind into tattered pieces
now, on my knees with my face
between your thighs
my wet lashes stroke you
you tell me this is where i belong
your scent is my oxygen
yet my breathing is shallow
the touch of leather
makes me tremble in fear and
anticipation...my lips part
my response excites you
i feel you smile into my hair
as you wrap my hair around your fist
this is how i show my love to you
accepting your dark desires
so vulnerable...
a wisp of wind, once holy
waits to fulfill any role you wish
ready to answer all your needs
one by one
i
love
you.
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Re. on sacrifice
24th Aug 2015 6:00pm
such submissive perfection!!!
so delicately sensual and sexy..
I love it Shauna :)
with love Brenda
so delicately sensual and sexy..
I love it Shauna :)
with love Brenda
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24th Aug 2015 6:02pm
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2015 6:47pm
I'm affraid my comments does not sound near as poetic and nice as yours. I really do like this poem though :-)
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24th Aug 2015 9:00pm
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24th Aug 2015 11:56pm
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24th Aug 2015 11:57pm
Hi DDean: Wow, that is a compliment I will try to live up to love your lines drip with glimmer. Thank You
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24th Aug 2015 11:58pm
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25th Aug 2015 00:01am
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25th Aug 2015 1:06am
These words more than read...........they feel. I feel like a voyeur hidden in your secret space. Very powerful, very visual......very sensual
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25th Aug 2015 2:32am
Hi shauna ,
I love to read you. Because in your
lines there is always something sweet ; almost innocent. Very sensual read. Sweet, tender, and
Sexy
I love to read you. Because in your
lines there is always something sweet ; almost innocent. Very sensual read. Sweet, tender, and
Sexy
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25th Aug 2015 5:07pm
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25th Aug 2015 5:07pm