Sex midnight and rise

lovely Jennifer a very sensual write beautiful :)

with love Brenda

Thanks doll!  💋

A delicious poem .Calamity Getting sleepy good tired and glow wishing good dreaming. Enjoyed.

Lol thank you Shakka. Sweet dreams 🌜J🌛

"Him still inside my cozy hot furnace " That cozy hot furnace has caused wars to be fought, shackles to be worn. That "cozy hot furnace" is a life giver . . . Really . . .Outstanding write!!

Ha! Love it. Thanks Jerry 💛

I really like the fragmentation you use here, very much like the kind of thinking between sleep and wakefulness.  "Him looking pleased with a good fuck."  Kind of getting cocky, no?  I just hope he lets you catch a few hours....    Really enjoyed this, Jennifer!  I'll read this again before my head hits the pillow.

Thats exactly why it was written that way!! Good Crow! 🌞🌚
Yes, cocky. 🐓 and maybe ill let Him get sleep. 💋 teehee

Thanks mih darlin Crow

J

I agree with Crow's observation.  That's very clever erotic writing with such powerful metaphors.  Where's my hood...?

Preferably on me. 👀 thank you sweetness. 🐨 down under indeed.
Yes please.

Giggle

💋J

Him-a lucky MF-ER... Me not so  much
Him smile n sleep...Me wishin for a lick
n such lol... Yea, hottness my dear! :)

Go shiny up your daggered hands PM.
Get your Dr. Grey, or do you prefer the sultrier Storm. Either way, and many more, you would be a catch for sure.

Thank you for reading doll. 🔧🔩✂

primitive poetry, coarse like our ancestral cave dwellers, the way they'd record it on the cave walls. sweet savage lust...

John... May i call you Sensei?

🍎J

I will never think of The Beatles' "Golden Slumbers" in the same light!

Lol dig the song so much. One of my favorites. Definitely my favorite one not written by Lennon. Thanks for reading JM! 💋

So de-lish & ethereal m'darlins.. enjoyed the cascade from satiated into slumber, then the snuggle/dreams,
then waking to start again.. then more slumber. Yes to All! I am definitely dark sighing all over your exhausted
behind here, dearie! [wicked rofl's]

Your visuals? DEAD-ON hawtness w/class..my fav being his satisfied sleepy..
here~>  "Him wearing dark hoods closed shut" ... is an awww line. ;)
&
" Beats and leaking still moments from Stop" <~ yum

"I go wet back to hot grind instinctual   Now his bend make my arch turn to     Cream "
~the cream at end brings thought of gush.. & "instinctual" hints to me of deep comfy intimacy..
like a cuddlefuk almost!

you make a gal crave the sleeps when it's interrupted so sweetly! gotsa bow to you lady, you have spanked
this bold form of poetry, layout & metaphor is greatly dripped into the brain.. [snugglefuks are the best, yes?]
loves you & this! *mwahs Jen, you sweet-thang!
~d

So honored by your words. You're such an inspiration to me and obviously many. Very proud of this one.
Love and kiss 💋 back.

💫J

as someone said above.. delicious :)

Thanks doll. For reading and liking.

💫J

This seems a different style for you Calam. The sharp words and abrupt flow without letting go of the eroticism. I like it!

Thank you so.DP!  Wanted s dreamstate effect. I appreciate your comment so!

🚬💋J