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Secret
You are my one treasure;
with no one else I share.
I keep you in my heart,
and carry you everywhere.
You are the secret, that
I shelter deep inside.
You are my most valued possession,
that I keep from envious eyes.
You are my light when
darkness fills my days,
and when I am lost
your love leads the way.
You mean so much to me;
it would be so easy to see.
If you were not a secret,
kept between you and me.
with no one else I share.
I keep you in my heart,
and carry you everywhere.
You are the secret, that
I shelter deep inside.
You are my most valued possession,
that I keep from envious eyes.
You are my light when
darkness fills my days,
and when I am lost
your love leads the way.
You mean so much to me;
it would be so easy to see.
If you were not a secret,
kept between you and me.
Published 19th Aug 2015
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 6:35am
We need that secret more than we'll admit.
I think we all need
something that is
Ours and belongs to
no one else.
Thanks
Keith
19th Aug 2015 2:07pm
This poem reminds me of the song "dirty little secret" by all American rejects. 😝 it's nice to see the softer side of you surface! Enjoyable read K2M! 💕Sissy
19th Aug 2015 6:32pm
I guess with age we tend soften.
I do not know the song that you
referenced. Maybeit just reflects a heart that has changed.
K2M
I do not know the song that you
referenced. Maybeit just reflects a heart that has changed.
K2M
Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 2:17pm
Very nicely rhymed, knot, enjoyable read.
19th Aug 2015 6:51pm
20th Aug 2015 1:09am
"You are my one treasure;
with no one else I share.
I keep you in my heart,
and carry you everywhere. "
~most fav is your begin .. heavy-melting lines here misters. depth of All, feels sunk inside these 4 lines.
Over-all, is a swooning bit of poetry sweetie.. I say- Take what's yours & tell it loudly! [course I do say shit like that often] w/wicked grins I bid you good eve, Keith-of-lovin-pen. strong write!
~d
with no one else I share.
I keep you in my heart,
and carry you everywhere. "
~most fav is your begin .. heavy-melting lines here misters. depth of All, feels sunk inside these 4 lines.
Over-all, is a swooning bit of poetry sweetie.. I say- Take what's yours & tell it loudly! [course I do say shit like that often] w/wicked grins I bid you good eve, Keith-of-lovin-pen. strong write!
~d
22nd Aug 2015 11:52pm
Thank you for your always sweet comments. I think that I
have become a little too mushy the last week or
so.
Keith
have become a little too mushy the last week or
so.
Keith
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
20th Aug 2015 5:38am
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22nd Aug 2015 11:57pm
I really appreciate you taking the time to visit.
Your thoughts and comments are always
looked forward to. Your later assumption
would be the correct one.
Keith
Your thoughts and comments are always
looked forward to. Your later assumption
would be the correct one.
Keith
