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at night
I lie in bed
listening to
the trains
pretending
I'm going
somewhere
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published 18th Aug 2015
| Edited 21st Aug 2015
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Re. at night
19th Aug 2015 2:38am
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 7:25am
'dream a little dream of....' aint it great to have imagination :)

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19th Aug 2015 11:59am
Re. at night
An all too common feeling I know too well. Wish i was on a train to some not so far away adventure right now :)
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19th Aug 2015 12:01pm
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19th Aug 2015 8:29am
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19th Aug 2015 12:02pm
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19th Aug 2015 10:34pm
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19th Aug 2015 11:10pm
I do that some times too...
I pretend and pretend..
then embark unto dreamland.
(gets the job done)
Thank you for this piece Dart
Darker.
I pretend and pretend..
then embark unto dreamland.
(gets the job done)
Thank you for this piece Dart
Darker.
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19th Aug 2015 11:58pm
Re. at night
20th Aug 2015 00:48am
I love this and do it with planes. Lie back in the grass night or day and wonder who is looking down at me looking up wondering where they're going.
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Re: Re. at night
20th Aug 2015 1:37am
trains have always loomed large in my life..:)
around here the old Victorian railway embankments
and bridges and tunnels around London Bridge
reverberate with my childhood -
although of course the reverberation may simply
be the trains..!
around here the old Victorian railway embankments
and bridges and tunnels around London Bridge
reverberate with my childhood -
although of course the reverberation may simply
be the trains..!
Re: Re. at night
20th Aug 2015 1:42am
I remember them when I lived in England as well. Learned to count boxcars that way. Rumbling jets above and earth vibrations from trains below. Both are a beautiful way to daydream.
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Re. at night
20th Aug 2015 7:08am
.......It was a train that took me away from here...........
indeed a lovely little thing in its way, and no doubt a thought that everyone can relate to. well done my man
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20th Aug 2015 4:20pm
Re. at night
21st Aug 2015 12:46pm
It's a bit strange - I watch planes in the sky and imagine where they are going, wishing I was going too :-)
another wee cracker :-)
another wee cracker :-)
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