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Male Perspective
Toes to face your tongue licks me,
Never missing a spot.
My sweet Dark Queen, in that g-string,
You wake me up so hawt.
Your morning fare, my cock laid bare,
You place tongue to the tip.
While I work folds for all they hold,
To bring forth that first drip.
Always surprised the things you do...
The things Your Brain brings out,
You slide on down the joy you've found
As I give taste your pout.
Fingers in ass, my teeth on clit,
I flick my tongue beneath,
And bring first cream my fuck of dream,
As soft moan you bequeath.
Smooth as silk slide, your sweet mouth glides,
Pausing on gag reflex.
Cunt clinching tight with your delight,
My face soaked in your sex.
Tongue lingering in your hot spots,
Head spinning, insides thrumming.
Male Perspective calling the shots
Keeps you coming... and cumming!
My cock in swell, close you can tell,
You wait my creamy gush.
Fingers in squeeze rewards your pleas[e]...
And cums forth in a rush.
Your head pulled back, true act of class,
You have me paint your face...
Rubbing it in with "I win" grin.
Oh, I'll accept second place. ;)
Published 15th Aug 2015
| Edited 16th Aug 2015
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15th Aug 2015 4:19am
Pretty hot there Mr Mike, see someone is being taken
of. Smoking ink man. Nice smooth rhythm and rhyme.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
Keith(k2m)
of. Smoking ink man. Nice smooth rhythm and rhyme.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
Keith(k2m)
16th Aug 2015 2:52am
Thank you for the read and the reply, keith, I have a pretty spectacular muse my meager writings will never truly measure up to. :)
Michael
Michael
15th Aug 2015 2:30pm
very hot imagery Micheal... it can cause a arson in this place hehe... great ink! *fist bump*
16th Aug 2015 2:53am
This entire forum has been a conflagration of late, hasn't it, MV? Appreciate you stopping in... and so glad you enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
15th Aug 2015 3:20pm
whooo "hawt" indeed...
"You have me paint your face..."
... who needs make-up [?]
*
this is sensuality bordering on indulgent smuttiness, a fine balance in your signature style
much enjoyed
"You have me paint your face..."
... who needs make-up [?]
*
this is sensuality bordering on indulgent smuttiness, a fine balance in your signature style
much enjoyed
16th Aug 2015 2:57am
"Bordering" I shall have to redouble my efforts. lol I have heard from a very reliable source that um... these spoken of bodily secretions are actually one of the best things a woman can put on her skin. How could I help but promote the idea? having all women's best interests at heart, mind you.
Thank you for stopping in, dear Katja. Always happy to have you here. :)
Michael
Thank you for stopping in, dear Katja. Always happy to have you here. :)
Michael
15th Aug 2015 10:42pm
"And bring first cream my fuck of dream,
As soft moan you bequeath."
~toe-curling image.. and This ~~> 'fuck of dream' ..is my fav phrase ever.. EVER!
"Smooth as silk slide, your sweet mouth glides,
Pausing on gag reflex. <~ just (!!)... cuz y'know.
Cunt clinching tight with your delight,
My face soaked in your sex.
~involuntary swallow ..just sayin'."
"My cock in swell, close you can tell, <~very hot closeness depicted here.. I'm callin it an 'awwes' line.
You wait my creamy gush.
Fingers in squeeze rewards your pleas[e]...
And cums forth in a rush."
~the image splashed & granted here is sexy sweet babe.. loves it all but partial *here.
*kisses ~T
As soft moan you bequeath."
~toe-curling image.. and This ~~> 'fuck of dream' ..is my fav phrase ever.. EVER!
"Smooth as silk slide, your sweet mouth glides,
Pausing on gag reflex. <~ just (!!)... cuz y'know.
Cunt clinching tight with your delight,
My face soaked in your sex.
~involuntary swallow ..just sayin'."
"My cock in swell, close you can tell, <~very hot closeness depicted here.. I'm callin it an 'awwes' line.
You wait my creamy gush.
Fingers in squeeze rewards your pleas[e]...
And cums forth in a rush."
~the image splashed & granted here is sexy sweet babe.. loves it all but partial *here.
*kisses ~T
16th Aug 2015 3:02am
"'fuck of dream' ..is my fav phrase ever.. EVER! "
Alright, I admit it...you called me your dreamfuk first. rofl Surprised you didn't give me the "my" in all caps there. :) I owe you... I know.
"~involuntary swallow ..just sayin'." Now that is a damn sexy image you put in my mind. How come your replies are always so much better than my poems?
I thank you for the heart warming reply love. It always pleases me to please you...but you *knew that.
*kisses
Michael
Alright, I admit it...you called me your dreamfuk first. rofl Surprised you didn't give me the "my" in all caps there. :) I owe you... I know.
"~involuntary swallow ..just sayin'." Now that is a damn sexy image you put in my mind. How come your replies are always so much better than my poems?
I thank you for the heart warming reply love. It always pleases me to please you...but you *knew that.
*kisses
Michael
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16th Aug 2015 9:42am
Ha, took me a sec to realize what steel you were talking about... Tantalizing thought that. Omg you can be so wicked with your words. So glad to see you back, Taryn. You've been missed.
Michael
Michael
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