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CEREBRAL SEDUCTION
(Composed for the "Sapiosexual" competition)
Although beauty fades
bodies deteriorate
wit remains sexy
Although beauty fades
bodies deteriorate
wit remains sexy
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 14th Aug 2015
| Edited 10th Jan 2018
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thh
14th Aug 2015 6:47pm
Ahhh, Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
You have perfectly encapsulated this core truth. My grandmother always said: choose who you decide to spend your life with well for all else may depart, but if their mind fascinates you, there will always be hope for boredom is the true bane of relationships.
I believe there is some validity to this for when we continue to intrigue each other, there remains some connection, mayhap interest, at least. ;-p
Ah well, I've blathered on, luv. Please forgive me. Tis an exceedingly well-crafted verse. You've said it all: so very well and so sparingly.
Perfection, really. :-*
You have perfectly encapsulated this core truth. My grandmother always said: choose who you decide to spend your life with well for all else may depart, but if their mind fascinates you, there will always be hope for boredom is the true bane of relationships.
I believe there is some validity to this for when we continue to intrigue each other, there remains some connection, mayhap interest, at least. ;-p
Ah well, I've blathered on, luv. Please forgive me. Tis an exceedingly well-crafted verse. You've said it all: so very well and so sparingly.
Perfection, really. :-*
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Re: thh
14th Aug 2015 8:33pm
Thank you Savaja! I love your grandmother's philosophy. Boredom can be a relationships death knell for sure. I do so appreciate your comments.
Re. CEREBRAL SEDUCTION
14th Aug 2015 6:56pm
You got it Gahdess! The mind is the most powerful erogenous zone. This is short (as befits haiku) but very much a turn on, now that I think about it. Great job! (Great title too!)
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14th Aug 2015 8:37pm
Thank you Crow! It's funny, I looked at my clock and said "damn I want to write for this one" but there's only 5 minutes to spare...Haiku to the rescue! Okay, turns out I really had an hour and 5 minutes :) Oh well...I don't think I had much more to say. I appreciate, always, your encouraging words.
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14th Aug 2015 8:16pm
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14th Aug 2015 8:41pm
Thank you Loo! I appreciate your having read and commented on this piece. I am glad you enjoyed the very short journey. I am thrilled to acquaint myself with your work...perhaps a little too thrilled sometimes nudge nudge wink wink :D
Re. CEREBRAL SEDUCTION
15th Aug 2015 2:58pm
oooh touch my mind & i'll lick yours ;)
in all seriousness, i love this
xoxox
in all seriousness, i love this
xoxox
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15th Aug 2015 9:21pm
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2015 4:11pm
a well spoken eternal truth..

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