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Fill me
I read your words, found them a delicacy.
Heard you recite them, made me hunger for more.
To feast on those lips, breakfast, lunch and dinner.
That would almost satisfy me.
But the desert,
Feeling the full weight of you on me.
Having the whole of you pounding me.
To fall asleep making love to you.
And to wake with you inside me.
Mmmm, the desert, yes please......
Cum, fill my sweet tooth.
Heard you recite them, made me hunger for more.
To feast on those lips, breakfast, lunch and dinner.
That would almost satisfy me.
But the desert,
Feeling the full weight of you on me.
Having the whole of you pounding me.
To fall asleep making love to you.
And to wake with you inside me.
Mmmm, the desert, yes please......
Cum, fill my sweet tooth.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 12th Aug 2015
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Re. Fill me
12th Aug 2015 7:22pm
Re: Re. Fill me
12th Aug 2015 11:23pm
Re. Fill me
Anonymous
12th Aug 2015 7:40pm
My, my, have we got a wonderful thirst for raw, excitable SEX! And a LOT of it at that!t Hope it is yours for the taking, Jen.
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Re: Re. Fill me
12th Aug 2015 11:24pm
Re. Fill me
12th Aug 2015 9:17pm
"But the desert,
Feeling the full weight of you on me. <~ yum
Having the whole of you pounding me.
To fall asleep making love to you.
And to wake with you inside me." <~ absolute best thing to open eyes upon/around/beneath/etc.. ;)
~F-ing hot as Hades tits & just as perfect.. definite fav times you've captured sweetie!
~d
Feeling the full weight of you on me. <~ yum
Having the whole of you pounding me.
To fall asleep making love to you.
And to wake with you inside me." <~ absolute best thing to open eyes upon/around/beneath/etc.. ;)
~F-ing hot as Hades tits & just as perfect.. definite fav times you've captured sweetie!
~d
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Re: Re. Fill me
12th Aug 2015 11:22pm
Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 00:25am
Yup this is good poetry, a real tasty dessert indeed.
Although I think let's spice it up with a little debauchery
All night I lay awake barely sleeping
My heart throbbing and leaping
The waves of ecstasy consuming me
Yet I wonder if it's all real
Earlier she'd scratched and begged
Arousal at its peak, she pegged
Like a masterful artist going anal
Her appetite most certainly carnal
Straps on, she sticked it up plunging
Switching roles, my virile longing
Replaced by a deep seated hunger
Unable to lay a moment longer
My quest to explore her delicate skin
To send her to hell, taking her in
Fingers striding through cleavage
Her breasts alarmed needed leverage
Lips silencing them into submission
It was a much anticipated mission
Yet time took its cool, moving slowly
The party beginning, why hurry?
Tentative strokes of her thighs
Send her to mount oblivion so high
She captured, lips on her clit
Telling a story unfolding in heat
She moaned feverishly, yet thirsty
Lifting her without being hasty
Her back on the wall, she all creamy
Body panting, dessert really steamy
Although I think let's spice it up with a little debauchery
All night I lay awake barely sleeping
My heart throbbing and leaping
The waves of ecstasy consuming me
Yet I wonder if it's all real
Earlier she'd scratched and begged
Arousal at its peak, she pegged
Like a masterful artist going anal
Her appetite most certainly carnal
Straps on, she sticked it up plunging
Switching roles, my virile longing
Replaced by a deep seated hunger
Unable to lay a moment longer
My quest to explore her delicate skin
To send her to hell, taking her in
Fingers striding through cleavage
Her breasts alarmed needed leverage
Lips silencing them into submission
It was a much anticipated mission
Yet time took its cool, moving slowly
The party beginning, why hurry?
Tentative strokes of her thighs
Send her to mount oblivion so high
She captured, lips on her clit
Telling a story unfolding in heat
She moaned feverishly, yet thirsty
Lifting her without being hasty
Her back on the wall, she all creamy
Body panting, dessert really steamy
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Re: Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 00:33am
Your words are thrilling. And i have my moments of debauchery. This piece just wasnt where i wanted to convey it. It means something different to me. Thank you doll. 💋
Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 00:29am
Pretty hot if its hotter then hades tits! I'd say hotter then a hooker in church! Lol! Enjoyed reading Hun! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 00:34am
Re. Fill me
Anonymous
13th Aug 2015 2:15am
An invitation so artfully targeted. What man could resist such temptation. I love that expression of raw hunger.
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Re: Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 2:18am
Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 3:02pm
life is short, you should have dessert first
gigglesnorts
miss jen this is tres doux, down to the last drop
gigglesnorts
miss jen this is tres doux, down to the last drop
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Re: Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 3:23pm
Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 6:30pm
wow a hot sweet tooth indeed... you cook up a delicious ink Jenn... keep spilling that fire :D
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Re: Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 6:48pm
Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 11:05pm
a loving erotic piece Jennifer...about someone you care for?
yes...i can relate....
yes...i can relate....
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Re: Re. Fill me
13th Aug 2015 11:57pm
Yes, someone i cate for. Thank you sweetie. Glad you relate. Thanks so much for reading. 🌹
Re. Fill me
14th Aug 2015 6:40am
Appreciation for those intimate moments that make life bearable! Nice write, Enjoyed.
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Re: Re. Fill me
14th Aug 2015 6:46am
Re. Fill me
14th Aug 2015 11:11am
Jen no addition could be made to that, reading it for the very second time it is an inspirational work.
well, I read your words, found them a delicacy.
Heard you recite them, made me hunger for more.
To feast on those lips, breakfast, lunch and dinner.
That would almost satisfy me.
It is a perfectionist poem, gad to be the first to add to my reading list.
well, I read your words, found them a delicacy.
Heard you recite them, made me hunger for more.
To feast on those lips, breakfast, lunch and dinner.
That would almost satisfy me.
It is a perfectionist poem, gad to be the first to add to my reading list.
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Re: Re. Fill me
14th Aug 2015 1:47pm
Oh! Wow, honored. And i certainly took no offense to your great words before. Thought they were awesome. Thanks sweetie! 💋
Re. Fill me
14th Aug 2015 11:45pm
if sex is a desert, then it should be a knickerbocker glory! another yummy and enjoyable read...
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Re: Re. Fill me
15th Aug 2015 00:08am
Thanks doll! But whats a knickerbocker glory? Curious. Never heard the tearm. 🌹
Re: Re. Fill me
28th May 2018 5:11pm
a knickerbocker glory is a tall glass full of ice cream strawberry and/or chocolate sauce with nuts on top which is eaten with a very long spoon, it's nearly as delish as sex. just love licking that spoon! lol! and yum!
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