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Sirs gift
I brought her for Sir as a gift.
This lovely dark eyed latina.
Full lips, full breasts, very ample ass.
Sir sat in a chair.
I layed her on the bed.
We started kissing, those lips
So full. Tasted so sweet.
I took her breast in hand, kissed, then sucked.
Felt her nipples go so hard in my mouth.
She was moaning words in spanish, sounded like a sexy song.
Keeping my eyes on Sir, his smile showed me his approval.
She began to go down my body, kissing my neck all down to my tits where she kissed my pink nipples, i told her to bite.
She obeyed, and my cunt flooded.
I needed her mouth there.
Pushed her down slowly.
She spread my lips with her fingers and licked, tickling my clit.
I was writhing, now begging for release.
Sir walked over.
I pulled her up, her sweet mouth back on mine.
Tasting myself there.
And then i felt him enter me, hard thrusts, my ass rising to take him all in.
I came, screaming her name and his.
He exploded into me.
His cock beating
The rhythm of thank you.
This lovely dark eyed latina.
Full lips, full breasts, very ample ass.
Sir sat in a chair.
I layed her on the bed.
We started kissing, those lips
So full. Tasted so sweet.
I took her breast in hand, kissed, then sucked.
Felt her nipples go so hard in my mouth.
She was moaning words in spanish, sounded like a sexy song.
Keeping my eyes on Sir, his smile showed me his approval.
She began to go down my body, kissing my neck all down to my tits where she kissed my pink nipples, i told her to bite.
She obeyed, and my cunt flooded.
I needed her mouth there.
Pushed her down slowly.
She spread my lips with her fingers and licked, tickling my clit.
I was writhing, now begging for release.
Sir walked over.
I pulled her up, her sweet mouth back on mine.
Tasting myself there.
And then i felt him enter me, hard thrusts, my ass rising to take him all in.
I came, screaming her name and his.
He exploded into me.
His cock beating
The rhythm of thank you.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 11th Aug 2015
| Edited 12th Aug 2015
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Re. Sirs gift
Anonymous
11th Aug 2015 3:41pm
Ahhh . . . Would have loved to have been there . . . Very erotic writing, Jen . . .
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11th Aug 2015 3:43pm
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11th Aug 2015 3:57pm
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11th Aug 2015 4:03pm
Re. Sirs gift
11th Aug 2015 4:13pm
What a gift, you are so very
generous. And to think I was
happy over a pair of head phones
and a pair of shoes.
generous. And to think I was
happy over a pair of head phones
and a pair of shoes.
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11th Aug 2015 4:22pm
Re. Sirs gift
11th Aug 2015 10:35pm
That is a hot scene, Calamity. It does not matter what language she speaks...we all know what she was saying.
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Re: Re. Sirs gift
11th Aug 2015 11:08pm
Yes. I know quite a bit of spanish. But her words needed no translation. 💋
Re. Sirs gift
11th Aug 2015 10:48pm
fav lines..
"She was moaning words in spanish, sounded like a sexy song."
&
"I pulled her up, her sweet mouth back on mine.
And then i felt him enter me, hard thrusts, my ass rising to take him all in.
I came, screaming her name and his."
~most hottest thoughts.. the kissing her, tasting yourself, being filled by him. yep.. juicy read m'dear,,
mind pics galore.. great pen use & the gift really wud be in the giving ;) gd smokin!
~d
"She was moaning words in spanish, sounded like a sexy song."
&
"I pulled her up, her sweet mouth back on mine.
And then i felt him enter me, hard thrusts, my ass rising to take him all in.
I came, screaming her name and his."
~most hottest thoughts.. the kissing her, tasting yourself, being filled by him. yep.. juicy read m'dear,,
mind pics galore.. great pen use & the gift really wud be in the giving ;) gd smokin!
~d
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Re: Re. Sirs gift
11th Aug 2015 11:10pm
Re. Sirs gift
Anonymous
11th Aug 2015 11:02pm
Oh I find myself the invisible participant, visualizing it through your words. You didn't see me in that dark corner watching.. or maybe you did...
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11th Aug 2015 11:11pm
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12th Aug 2015 1:40am
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12th Aug 2015 3:07am
Re. Sirs gift
12th Aug 2015 1:49am
erotic ink at its finest... what a spicy gift for all to enjoy... great drop!
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12th Aug 2015 3:08am
Re. Sirs gift
12th Aug 2015 2:50am
I'm sure everyone needed a cigarette after this read! Smoking hot!! 😈
💕Sissy
💕Sissy
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12th Aug 2015 3:10am
Re. Sirs gift
12th Aug 2015 12:37pm
you are far more generous with your gifting than i ltm
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this is a rare explicit piece by you & well played indeed, miss...
"He exploded into me.
His cock beating
The rhythm of thank you."
... oh the tingles!
loveeeeed this
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this is a rare explicit piece by you & well played indeed, miss...
"He exploded into me.
His cock beating
The rhythm of thank you."
... oh the tingles!
loveeeeed this
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Re: Re. Sirs gift
12th Aug 2015 1:56pm
Thank you sweetness. No, i'm not usually this explicit. Was a little nervous to press submit, but i liked the piece. I'm so happy you do as well. 💋
Re. Sirs gift
12th Aug 2015 7:25pm
Best gift giver ever! This poem is a super sensual gift...thank you!
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13th Aug 2015 00:15am
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14th Aug 2015 6:54am
Re. Sirs gift
14th Aug 2015 11:29pm
what a beautifully sensual 'ménage a trois, really enjoyable and quite delicious, yum!
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15th Aug 2015 00:06am
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22nd Aug 2015 4:38pm
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22nd Aug 2015 4:52pm
Thank you so Shauna!
Happy to be able to read and hear from an incredible group of lusty ladies down here, you being one of the best talents.
A great group of chicks, unafraid and unapologetic, hardcore sexy fuckin writers!
🚬💋J
Happy to be able to read and hear from an incredible group of lusty ladies down here, you being one of the best talents.
A great group of chicks, unafraid and unapologetic, hardcore sexy fuckin writers!
🚬💋J