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A Mere Minute
I got home last Monday
A smile on my face
Joy in my heart.
But that didn't last
More than a minute
Now everything is gone
My so-called true love
My trust in family
The happy ass songs
In a mere minute
A "normal" conversation starts
A few simple pictures
Underwear, Skinny dipping, Sex
These all broke me
In under a minute
In few mere minutes
Everything I possibly had
Didn't seem to matter
So I said goodbye
For another fragile minute...
A smile on my face
Joy in my heart.
But that didn't last
More than a minute
Now everything is gone
My so-called true love
My trust in family
The happy ass songs
In a mere minute
A "normal" conversation starts
A few simple pictures
Underwear, Skinny dipping, Sex
These all broke me
In under a minute
In few mere minutes
Everything I possibly had
Didn't seem to matter
So I said goodbye
For another fragile minute...
Published 9th Aug 2015
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2015 6:09pm
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7th Oct 2015 11:12am
"It only takes a minute girl
to fall in love, to fall in love..."
Those words are part of a verse in a song, your piece sparked that recalling. This is so very sad, if I were lucky enough to meet a woman who was THAT open n caring to give of her heart that quickly?? I'd NEVER let her go! Juss sayin...
to fall in love, to fall in love..."
Those words are part of a verse in a song, your piece sparked that recalling. This is so very sad, if I were lucky enough to meet a woman who was THAT open n caring to give of her heart that quickly?? I'd NEVER let her go! Juss sayin...
Anonymous
24th Apr 2016 11:32pm
These setbacks can make you stronger Jaimee.
