Stop Your Investment

Definitely has that air of darkness...
The subtle rhyme n rhythm made a subject like this a lil easier to digest. Nice work :)

thank you very much :)

Very interesting analogy doll. And i agree, would be hard to take its so heavy with pain, without the lovely rhyme to it. Nice work.💋

Thank you. The rhyming is terrible, I don't know what I was doing with it, but now it's done, and I live with the results. Thanks for commenting. I did like the analogy too, someone else told me it, so I ran with it and made a poem out of something they said. "I'm investing in you"

I like the flow of that poem.  It's kinda dark, but some of the greatest literature of all time is seeded in melancholy.  I'll add you to my reading list

:D yay! I'm in someone's reading list! It is kind of dark, I wrote it right after having a fight with my mother's boyfriend.