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Done
im done feeling pain
im done with you
and all the shit you put me through
im done being sad
i cant take anymore
im pushing our love out the door
you never cared
i was just some toy
you dont want me cause im not a boy
im done with this feeling
i begged and i pleaded
but i know when im not needed
so to stop this game
im saying goodbye
im done with tears falling from my eyes
im done with you
and all the shit you put me through
im done being sad
i cant take anymore
im pushing our love out the door
you never cared
i was just some toy
you dont want me cause im not a boy
im done with this feeling
i begged and i pleaded
but i know when im not needed
so to stop this game
im saying goodbye
im done with tears falling from my eyes
Published 5th Jun 2011
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6th Jun 2011 3:33pm
Very powerful. Was this writtne in the spur of the moment kind of thing or did something happen with you and your love? If so, I'm sorry to hear that but it did produce a wonderful poem that you should be very proud of.
6th Jun 2011 4:25pm
It was both a spur of the moment, and something else. I wasn't even trying. I just was so frustrated all that day, and words just came out of no where.
11th Jul 2011 7:46am
6th Oct 2012 4:13am
This shows healing and light underneath the dark cloud of whatever drove you to write this.
