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The Coffee Shoppe
We take a little walk,
just some time to talk.
Going to our favored spot,
the local coffee shoppe.
Just two lonely hearts,
sharing in despair.
Needing someone to listen;
needing someone to care.
Just some friendly ear,
someone to be near.
Talking for hours, sharing
word's healing power.
Careful not fall, to a
lonely heart's call.
Trying to be just a friend,
someone to confide in.
Listening to all that's missing,
mind wanders; to thoughts
of kissing.
Finding comfort in your gaze,
as being held by you for days.
For I am lonely too.
spilling my sorrows before you.
In the hope of being consoled;
just needing someone to hold.
Looking for some sign,
of what you have in mind.
No longer sadness do I hear,
it seems to have disappeared.
Sweet smile on your face,
no tears left to trace.
You reach and touch my hand,
it's more than I can stand
The feel of your soft touch,
I needed that so much.
A signal or a sign,
I can't make up my mind.
But myself I soon remind....
this is not dating time.
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Re. The Coffee Shoppe
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2015 8:35pm
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 1:07am
Thank you for taking the time to
read. I really am glad you liked
the last two stanzas, was trying
to find a way to end clean.
read. I really am glad you liked
the last two stanzas, was trying
to find a way to end clean.
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
2nd Aug 2015 8:55pm
A touching piece fueled with deep emotion that many will relate to. A great write x
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 1:09am
Thanks for taking your time
to give mea read. This is the
I like to write. Thanks again
to give mea read. This is the
I like to write. Thanks again
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
2nd Aug 2015 9:08pm
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3rd Aug 2015 1:11am
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Aug 2015 11:00pm
2nd Aug 2015 10:59pm
Good read. Reminds me of occasions when I've has issues and I doscuss them with another in emotional turmoil. Keeping feelings in balance can be very confronting. The last line says it all. Insightful piece..
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 1:13am
Thank you Derrick your comments
are always looked forward to.
Glad you liked the last line; just
fell into place.
are always looked forward to.
Glad you liked the last line; just
fell into place.
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 00:40am
Doh... the yearn to this is beautiful.... so would have to take that chance if it were me in those shoes. Still very respectable from the other side too... coffee alone sucks. :) Enjoyed the ponder.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 1:18am
Michael I thought if anyone
would like and understand
this it would be you. Thanks
for your time and comment .
K2m
would like and understand
this it would be you. Thanks
for your time and comment .
K2m
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 2:30am
"Talking for hours, sharing
word's healing power."
~says all.. perfect!
Coffee and hand-holding in consolation can be that special..
maybe slow n easy will win the race here.. great, gentle poetry,
w/ just the right dallop of attraction. sweet stuff m'friend!
~d
word's healing power."
~says all.. perfect!
Coffee and hand-holding in consolation can be that special..
maybe slow n easy will win the race here.. great, gentle poetry,
w/ just the right dallop of attraction. sweet stuff m'friend!
~d
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 3:00am
Thanks Ms d for your sweet words.
As always awaiting your thoughts.
Nite. :)
As always awaiting your thoughts.
Nite. :)
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 10:25am
seems like one wants more than friendship & the other is afraid. risky business, either way, I guess...
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
3rd Aug 2015 11:52am
Thank you very much Mr Feddeler
for gracing my write with you
presence. You thoughts and comments will be well received .
K2m
for gracing my write with you
presence. You thoughts and comments will be well received .
K2m
Re. The Coffee Shoppe
4th Aug 2015 8:20am
Two beings connecting. Simple, sweet, and so very needed. A lovely write doll. A pleasure to read. 💋
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Re: Re. The Coffee Shoppe
4th Aug 2015 9:18pm
Thank you. You are always so
kind. I just read your lastest
release.,.. Different but nice
kind. I just read your lastest
release.,.. Different but nice