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Paradigm
How painfully delicate
soft
slow
excruciatingly so
his talented fingers could be
Mmmm god...
Sending me withinin sight
of the place
i would stay
day
night
there forever if i could
Yeeess please....
Just one more so small
tiny
touch
would rocket me
But to beg
a sigh
cry
Would release only the invisible
restraints
ties
that bind
his command had created
Then cums punishment
dicipline
sting
good smack
Oh fuck!
Those big rough hands
would make
this sweet
ache
Given by painfully delicate
soft
slow
talented fingers
Would make
those big
rough
painfully delicate
talented
Oh fuck!
Those rough hands
seem
infinitely more gentle
soft
slow
excruciatingly so
his talented fingers could be
Mmmm god...
Sending me withinin sight
of the place
i would stay
day
night
there forever if i could
Yeeess please....
Just one more so small
tiny
touch
would rocket me
But to beg
a sigh
cry
Would release only the invisible
restraints
ties
that bind
his command had created
Then cums punishment
dicipline
sting
good smack
Oh fuck!
Those big rough hands
would make
this sweet
ache
Given by painfully delicate
soft
slow
talented fingers
Would make
those big
rough
painfully delicate
talented
Oh fuck!
Those rough hands
seem
infinitely more gentle
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 1st Aug 2015
| Edited 5th Dec 2016
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Re. Paradigm
Anonymous
1st Aug 2015 3:03pm
Yep, we who have the rough hand understand they have two ways of pleasing, Jen, handled somewhat roughly, and then pleasing with sweet caresses.
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Aug 2015 1:31am
2nd Aug 2015 1:30am
No, and I wasn't attempting to make me out as something I am not. I guess I just got into the poem. Sorry.
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2nd Aug 2015 2:48am
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2015 2:57am
Got your message, everything is cool.
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1st Aug 2015 4:39pm
very hot and descriptive with the right hands to spice up the moment for two... keep flowing that fire... great drop cal!
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2nd Aug 2015 00:23am
there's a lovely balance of tender & a little savagery here, jen...
"But to beg
a sigh
cry
Would release only the invisible
restraints
ties
that bind"
^^^^
absolute freedom in captivity. love that.
... really a gorgeous write through & through, miss
"But to beg
a sigh
cry
Would release only the invisible
restraints
ties
that bind"
^^^^
absolute freedom in captivity. love that.
... really a gorgeous write through & through, miss
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2nd Aug 2015 00:55am
So happy with this comment. If anythin, I want others to understand my freedom in captivity. Perfectly put. Thank you so much. 💋
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2015 1:48am
I totaly enjoy the way your frankness enlightens me. You go places I have balked at entering, but I appreciate how you let me peek through the window Jen.
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2nd Aug 2015 2:43am
Mm, how encouraging. And we dont all need or want the same things in any way, especially when it comes to sexuality. Tollerance and the willingness to "peek" are important. The ability to find beauty in things we dont quite understand makes us kinder, more empathetic human beings. Thank you Sir. 💋
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I would stay day night forever if I could .Love the passion, the fire. It is so brilliantly deliberate in its delivery.I love the bam..bab..bam of it. You are so generous in handed out treats.
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2nd Aug 2015 6:10pm
"How painfully delicate
soft
slow
excruciatingly so
his talented fingers could be
Mmmm god... "
~sweet gods aaand unholy-hells.. this is a perfect open & capture of pleasure-pain melt..
"Then cums punishment
dicipline
sting
good smack
Oh fuck!"
~lady.. you. just. rock. ..!! dreamy sweet aches flow from your pen!
adored this.. & following.. will never tire of the emotion you evoke..;)
~d
soft
slow
excruciatingly so
his talented fingers could be
Mmmm god... "
~sweet gods aaand unholy-hells.. this is a perfect open & capture of pleasure-pain melt..
"Then cums punishment
dicipline
sting
good smack
Oh fuck!"
~lady.. you. just. rock. ..!! dreamy sweet aches flow from your pen!
adored this.. & following.. will never tire of the emotion you evoke..;)
~d
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2nd Aug 2015 7:01pm
My goodness, thank you so much 💋 honered by your words. I respect your work very much.
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2nd Aug 2015 6:54pm
There's a threshold crossed in this piece... love the way you build up to and take us over it with you. Quite sexy, that. Much enjoyed your sultry ink.
Michael
Michael
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2nd Aug 2015 7:04pm
Thank you so much Michael. I always enjoy hearing your feedback, gives me insight into what my audience is feeling. You make me a better writer. I enjoy your work as well 💋
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3rd Aug 2015 10:44am
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4th Aug 2015 00:30am
Commands snap
From finger tips
Captivating its pray
With a whip
Wrapping her desires
With twisted lips
Releasing the world
With his grip
Very nicely written, enjoyed this
From finger tips
Captivating its pray
With a whip
Wrapping her desires
With twisted lips
Releasing the world
With his grip
Very nicely written, enjoyed this
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4th Aug 2015 1:36am
Ahh, out comes the whip. What fun! 💋 thank you doll for reading and your tantalizing response.
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4th Aug 2015 10:15am
Sexy, Mmmmm.. Oh how I merely squirm and tightening myself to death.. Beautiful posture, loving your core here. Always
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6th Aug 2015 00:20am
In the dark corners of all our minds there lurks a truth that is bound by the fears of others...love this erotic piece Jen.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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7th Aug 2015 6:20pm
Wow, paints a really powerful image, and the use of short lines makes it so more intense to read. xx
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4th Oct 2015 7:29pm
Jennifer my darling, being a sub myself I can relate to this strongly. There is freedom in bondage. There is a liberation which only we subs understand. I love reading your exploration of this side of your sexuality. I learn from you through your creative gems. Absolutely exquisite is this dark beauty.
Love and wet kisses,
John
Love and wet kisses,
John
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Re. Paradigm
4th Oct 2015 8:47pm
I thought so sweet sugar tush. Happy you finally said so. But enough of you read to see. Find it extremely interesting and cant wait to compate notes. Find out what true submission means to you. I am capable of dominatrix hand, have done so with thirds when i brought a girl for my master.
We will talk lover.
Kissess on tummy for that intamacy
We will talk lover.
Kissess on tummy for that intamacy