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Lesson 1
There was an immediate and thrilling sexual attraction between the two of us.
And more than that, to which I was unaccustomed,
we began both intellectual and emotional intercourse almost at once.
Over a drink in a crowded bar,
a man blew slow soulful music into a saxophone.
Creating a seductive soundtrack to what I would later recognize as my first lesson with Sir.
He began teaching me the pleasure in pleasing him.
While talking, I could feel his eyes seeing deeper, farther into me.
He wanted me, of that I was sure.
I knew what wanting looked like.
But this was different, these dark eyes staring into mine.
Sir wanted inside me.
And in all kinds of ways.
Feeling vulnerable, and a little afraid, I stared back.
And became willing prey.
He handed me a tip for our musician.
Said "Walk slowly love, I want to watch."
My neck and face went hot.
I stood up too fast, half knocking over my chair.
Felt his strong hand grasp me firmly around my wrist.
"No love, slow down, I wish to see you move, take an eternity."
Something in his touch, his voice, had steadied me.
So I rose slowly, giving him all of my body to see.
I turned from him, but the effect of his eyes on me did not weaken.
Knowing they were there, hot, penetrating, I became aware of all of me.
The rhythm of sex in my hips as I walked.
The silky slide of my dress over my tummy and legs as I moved.
When I reached the stage, I turned, giving him my profile.
Bent over so slowly, inhaling purposely, forcing my tits up and out.
Lifting my ass up high, making my legs long.
I dropped the tip in the jar.
As I stood and turned back, I met Sirs eyes with a soul shaking, almost gravitational pull, and shuddered.
The force of it was dizzying, completely arousing me.
I felt my cunt go wet, my nipples harden.
I'm unsure how I made it back to him, maybe I floated.
As I sat down, Sirs hand went up my dress and between my thighs, thanking me.
I had never known anything as rewarding and needed as that touch.
Until he whispered in my ear,
"Good girl."
And more than that, to which I was unaccustomed,
we began both intellectual and emotional intercourse almost at once.
Over a drink in a crowded bar,
a man blew slow soulful music into a saxophone.
Creating a seductive soundtrack to what I would later recognize as my first lesson with Sir.
He began teaching me the pleasure in pleasing him.
While talking, I could feel his eyes seeing deeper, farther into me.
He wanted me, of that I was sure.
I knew what wanting looked like.
But this was different, these dark eyes staring into mine.
Sir wanted inside me.
And in all kinds of ways.
Feeling vulnerable, and a little afraid, I stared back.
And became willing prey.
He handed me a tip for our musician.
Said "Walk slowly love, I want to watch."
My neck and face went hot.
I stood up too fast, half knocking over my chair.
Felt his strong hand grasp me firmly around my wrist.
"No love, slow down, I wish to see you move, take an eternity."
Something in his touch, his voice, had steadied me.
So I rose slowly, giving him all of my body to see.
I turned from him, but the effect of his eyes on me did not weaken.
Knowing they were there, hot, penetrating, I became aware of all of me.
The rhythm of sex in my hips as I walked.
The silky slide of my dress over my tummy and legs as I moved.
When I reached the stage, I turned, giving him my profile.
Bent over so slowly, inhaling purposely, forcing my tits up and out.
Lifting my ass up high, making my legs long.
I dropped the tip in the jar.
As I stood and turned back, I met Sirs eyes with a soul shaking, almost gravitational pull, and shuddered.
The force of it was dizzying, completely arousing me.
I felt my cunt go wet, my nipples harden.
I'm unsure how I made it back to him, maybe I floated.
As I sat down, Sirs hand went up my dress and between my thighs, thanking me.
I had never known anything as rewarding and needed as that touch.
Until he whispered in my ear,
"Good girl."
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 30th Jul 2015
| Edited 5th Dec 2016
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Re. Lesson 1
30th Jul 2015 10:01pm
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30th Jul 2015 11:24pm
Thanks doll 💋 appreciate your taking time to read, and give feedback so much.
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30th Jul 2015 10:30pm
that is one hot lesson there... very seductive and sexy begining to end... amazing ink
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30th Jul 2015 11:30pm
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 2:57am
THIS is a kickass poem. Beauty is in the eye of the . . . well, you know. It could just as easily been her wanting him to walk ahead of her so she could enjoy the view. The thing is we all have that "something" that certain people like, but many are afraid to admit it to themselves, never mind the object of their passion. You took this idea and really did something with it, and I totally approve of what you did.
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31st Jul 2015 3:11am
Thanks so much doll 💋 this idea was a very real event. Putting it down in words brought me there again. You can have your most intimate sexual experiences, in the middle of a crowded room, with all your clothes on. Isn't it wonderful!
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31st Jul 2015 4:02am
slow & sensual performance. you express the feeling of being naked beneath your clothes, really feeling it. the view is vivid from here...
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31st Jul 2015 4:25am
Thank you. And I was very naked in that moment, happy you felt that image. 💋
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31st Jul 2015 4:51am
So sexy and beautifully written, I see why it has been a while since you offered a read: perfection takes time.
"The rhythm of sex in your hips as you walked"
the silky slide of your dress over your tummy :)
Tantalizing sexy images thanks.......something to dream about thanks and nite nite k2m
"The rhythm of sex in your hips as you walked"
the silky slide of your dress over your tummy :)
Tantalizing sexy images thanks.......something to dream about thanks and nite nite k2m
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31st Jul 2015 4:58am
.💋 What an awesome compliment, perfect to end this day with. Thank you and sweet dreams.
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31st Jul 2015 7:19am
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31st Jul 2015 8:20am
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31st Jul 2015 12:05pm
My neck and face went hot.
I stood up too fast, half knocking over my chair. fantastic climax for rest of the sin
I stood up too fast, half knocking over my chair. fantastic climax for rest of the sin
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31st Jul 2015 12:50pm
"I knew what wanting looked like."
^^^^^^
love that line for some reason... there's something wonderfully 'lamb to the slaughter' about it
a fantastic write, thank you for sharing
~ k
^^^^^^
love that line for some reason... there's something wonderfully 'lamb to the slaughter' about it
a fantastic write, thank you for sharing
~ k
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31st Jul 2015 1:33pm
Oh, very interesting. I'm fond of that line myself, and you are certainly correct. Just being wanted, as you said like a lamb for slaughter, can be terrifying for me. I have been wanted, taken and used in my past in ways that were traumatic. I would never have a Dom who merely wanted me, there has to be an enormous amount of trust, respect, even love, for this kind of relationship to work for me. It was then incredibly therapeutic and empowering for me, to not be taken, but to give myself. 💋 thanks, you caught something hidden.
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31st Jul 2015 4:12pm
"I stood up too fast, half knocking over my chair.
Felt his strong hand grasp me firmly around my wrist.
"No love, slow down, I wish to see you move, take an eternity."
This. This erected my attention.
Felt his strong hand grasp me firmly around my wrist.
"No love, slow down, I wish to see you move, take an eternity."
This. This erected my attention.
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1st Aug 2015 1:03pm
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31st Jul 2015 5:34pm
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1st Aug 2015 1:04pm
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31st Jul 2015 5:57pm
Oh I know I told you, Sirs is a keeper.
Isn't it wonderful to know you are being watched while you walk?
Sensual y caliente ; )
Isn't it wonderful to know you are being watched while you walk?
Sensual y caliente ; )
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1st Aug 2015 1:08pm
Yes 💋 I told someone earlier, sexual experiences can happen anywhere, at any time. Fully dressed, naked at the same time. Yes💋 wonderful indeed!
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31st Jul 2015 6:56pm
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1st Aug 2015 1:10pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2015 4:51am
You take me back to when I was a musician in smoky dives. That was an exceptional piece, all the more because it evoked powerful memories in me, playing music for lovers or would-be seducers.
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1st Aug 2015 1:12pm
💋 Interesting. The point of view from the musician. Would make a cool companion piece. Thanks doll. Happy to see you here! I enjoy your work so much.
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2nd Aug 2015 6:11pm
Ahhh, calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
Somehow, I thought I'd subscribed to your updates. I see I hadn't. I've rectified that matter.
This poem is rather exquisite, full of tremulous anticipation and shivered delight. What truly creates and solidifies this interaction and makes of it so much more than mere exploitation is the emotional connection you so adeptly weave within.
That thread is glisteningly apparent and the rest of this coalesces around it. How adroit you are, luv. And, blessed. :-*
One tiny typo: in "The rythym of sex in my hips as I walked." rythym to rhythm
You have an extraordinary gift for creating vistas.
Somehow, I thought I'd subscribed to your updates. I see I hadn't. I've rectified that matter.
This poem is rather exquisite, full of tremulous anticipation and shivered delight. What truly creates and solidifies this interaction and makes of it so much more than mere exploitation is the emotional connection you so adeptly weave within.
That thread is glisteningly apparent and the rest of this coalesces around it. How adroit you are, luv. And, blessed. :-*
One tiny typo: in "The rythym of sex in my hips as I walked." rythym to rhythm
You have an extraordinary gift for creating vistas.
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2nd Aug 2015 6:52pm
Thank you so much for your kind words doll. And yes, the emotional connection fueled by trust and mutual respect is the cornerstone of a healthy Dom,Sub relationship. It was extraordinarily empowering for me, to choose to give up control. Although, that was based in role play. Knowing he took pleasure in all of it because I did as well. Never because he enjoyed having me really powerless, or ever took pleasure in demeaning me.
And thanks for bringing the spelling error to my attention, I always misspell that word! Lol
Your comments mean so much to me, I have so much respect for your talents as well.
And thanks for bringing the spelling error to my attention, I always misspell that word! Lol
Your comments mean so much to me, I have so much respect for your talents as well.
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4th Aug 2015 00:18am
Perfection in this write, Jennifer...throughly enjoyed the read and on my RL it goes... :)
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4th Aug 2015 1:28am
Honered sweetness. Thank you. Btw, i love your screen name. Says so much. I also enjoy your work very much. 💋
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4th Aug 2015 1:32am
Im not educated in writing poetry, the spaces between lines were accidental, i need to edit. Ive seen you help people with bbreaking pieces by stanza and verse. I realize the effectiveness of this in writing. If you ever have advise, id appreciate it. 💋
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14th Aug 2015 5:27am
a very intellectually seductive write..
He dominated you with his eyes and voice ahhh sexy..
the setup of what you were feeling is poetic sensual perfection ;)
loved the ending and reward mmm delicious write..
with love Crim
He dominated you with his eyes and voice ahhh sexy..
the setup of what you were feeling is poetic sensual perfection ;)
loved the ending and reward mmm delicious write..
with love Crim
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14th Aug 2015 5:39am
Thank you luv. I want respect, intellectual, and emotional connection with a dom. What others, want, need is up to them. But, i do wish them respect. Loved your write. 💋
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16th Aug 2015 1:36pm
Jesus Woman that was beautiful , erotic, the timing, the beat, the anticipation to the finish line, and sad. What a lovely creature you are.
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16th Aug 2015 2:03pm
Thank you very much doll. 💋 Sad? I see where maybe, that i needed the touch so. You made me think.
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17th Aug 2015 11:35pm
OhhOhhh. A most delcious poem! I read her twice. I feel this poem is a part of your wanting to manifest for a long time. Excellent writing.
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18th Aug 2015 00:08am
Yes. It was the beginning. I have no master now. Mine moved and i would would not leave my life here for him. My one act of defiance, but he understood. It is a position to be filled by someone i trust with, all of me. Maybe never again. But it was an awakening. And good for me. Thank you doll. 💋
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27th Aug 2015 00:08am
Okay...this really moved me. You made every little detail erotic in such a masterful way. Silky smooth and sultry read. By the end I wanted this guy to fuck me...or at least call me a good girl too. Love the intellectual and emotional intercourse and the eyes staring into her. Really powerful write that makes me want to read it again and again.
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27th Aug 2015 00:38am
Thank you for this huge compliment! I bet you'll be a firecracker down here in the DU.
💫J
💫J
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4th Oct 2015 3:16pm
My lover women I really really got turned on by this. After the first few lines my manhood stood at attention. This is perhaps my favorite of yours though they all are fantastic. It read like a dom sub relationship with a stranger. Every move you made on the dance floor felt like an erotic seduction which I would never want to let go of. When you moved your hips, derriere, and breasts just for him I got extremely turned on. The fact that all this happened in public made it white hot erotic for me. When his hand went up your dress I just got harder than Chinese Algebra. Stunning my darling lover woman.
Love and kisses,
John
Love and kisses,
John
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It was a Dom Sub relationship. My first writes here are about Sir my master. He was my only true Dom. I hold dear that relationship it was old guard and a true loving union of complete trust and respect. Sirs venus is about this relationship along with many in my first efforts. The collar, if i remember is a good one too. My friend Derrick is his screen name did a spoken word piece set to a jazz bass line cqlled. Bass in CJ4 t
In reponse to lesson 1. You would like the piiece.
Oh and you remindede of one ofvmy favorite lines in your piece " i am harder than chinese algebra," loved that sugar tush!
Love you my Lunar pull.
🌹Jennifer
In reponse to lesson 1. You would like the piiece.
Oh and you remindede of one ofvmy favorite lines in your piece " i am harder than chinese algebra," loved that sugar tush!
Love you my Lunar pull.
🌹Jennifer
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4th Oct 2015 5:56pm
When you call me sugar tush I just melt. So glad you liked that line.I enjoy this dance of words with you. ;-)
Love your Goddess of my nights,
John
Love your Goddess of my nights,
John
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4th Oct 2015 6:04pm
Then that shall be my cherrished pet name for you love..
Sugar tush, soul object of my affection and desire.
Sugar tush, soul object of my affection and desire.