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Sensitive Friend
Taking your pretty picture whole
Asking favors of a fellow
Sleeping in plastic wrap
I see you relapsing
I hear you breathing
Until your eating
Feel you sweating
Its only dreaming
My sensitive friend
I sense you want this to end
I sense the sights to mend
Queen of color, of good health
I could be your puppy
I know you, brick beater
Your not a normalcy student
My voice doesn't seem so prudent
I never said I approve
Only that I understand
I tried to hide
But I couldn't find
No captivating signs
To cover my sight
My mind
If you were still alive
I'd try to leave behind
My mind
If you were inside
I'd try to forgive
But your just a blade
And if scape my scab
I'll blot my eyes
Fighting away and realize
I was always staggering around
I was fading in your face
No sound, no care
I am just the same
I don't care, I don't care
I am broken pieces
I guess I cared
I'm getting scared
I whish I cared
Panic picnic
I'm off too
Whish I shared
Whish I cared
Asking favors of a fellow
Sleeping in plastic wrap
I see you relapsing
I hear you breathing
Until your eating
Feel you sweating
Its only dreaming
My sensitive friend
I sense you want this to end
I sense the sights to mend
Queen of color, of good health
I could be your puppy
I know you, brick beater
Your not a normalcy student
My voice doesn't seem so prudent
I never said I approve
Only that I understand
I tried to hide
But I couldn't find
No captivating signs
To cover my sight
My mind
If you were still alive
I'd try to leave behind
My mind
If you were inside
I'd try to forgive
But your just a blade
And if scape my scab
I'll blot my eyes
Fighting away and realize
I was always staggering around
I was fading in your face
No sound, no care
I am just the same
I don't care, I don't care
I am broken pieces
I guess I cared
I'm getting scared
I whish I cared
Panic picnic
I'm off too
Whish I shared
Whish I cared
Published 29th Jul 2015
| Edited 6th Aug 2015
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29th Jul 2015 4:24am
"I never said I approve
Only that I understand"
~'tis the 'only' way to be *true friend.. you are all heart, man!
"I don't care, I don't care
I am broken pieces
I guess I cared"
~our minds ever do this tortured back & forth, sorting our hearts mess, our hurts.
power is in your own re-read later, realization usually duz swack us, then.(I've found)
hughug that you've had this loss.. on a healing note, you've poured it out well darlins ;)
~d
Only that I understand"
~'tis the 'only' way to be *true friend.. you are all heart, man!
"I don't care, I don't care
I am broken pieces
I guess I cared"
~our minds ever do this tortured back & forth, sorting our hearts mess, our hurts.
power is in your own re-read later, realization usually duz swack us, then.(I've found)
hughug that you've had this loss.. on a healing note, you've poured it out well darlins ;)
~d
29th Jul 2015 4:43am
Why thanks miss, the amount of pain a put in there is monumental. I thank you for understanding it. Your words are always wonderful and put a smile on this face of mine.
