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Re. Thick
Anonymous
28th Jul 2015 4:24am
This poem should have been titled, "Arizona". . .because everything you described here, Sir PoetSpeak, is every bit of what Arizona is . .and I'm sure. . .'and then some'. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Thick
28th Jul 2015 2:29pm
Never been to Arizona, maybe I should pay a visit
Do they like poets out there ?
Thx xxx
Do they like poets out there ?
Thx xxx
Re. Thick
28th Jul 2015 4:37am
Ahhh, Granite, luv ~ :-*
I think I understand somewhat I didn't before. :-*
Somewhat about the nature of desire and chaos and mayhem and what that might wreak when strength is sought upon a slippery incline...
Revel in it, luv. You only have this once, after all. ;-*
I think I understand somewhat I didn't before. :-*
Somewhat about the nature of desire and chaos and mayhem and what that might wreak when strength is sought upon a slippery incline...
Revel in it, luv. You only have this once, after all. ;-*
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Re: Re. Thick
28th Jul 2015 2:30pm
All yous is true
What I write about is always the same, just different wording, it's my mantra and karma I suppose
Maybe one day there will be other themes, who knows ....
What I write about is always the same, just different wording, it's my mantra and karma I suppose
Maybe one day there will be other themes, who knows ....
Re. Thick
28th Jul 2015 1:08pm
love the one word line approach - unusual but it really works - I found myself reading it about 5 or 6 times introducing a slow beat - really works - gave me some inspirational ideas - pen to paper ideas :-)
:-)
:-)
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28th Jul 2015 2:31pm
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28th Jul 2015 2:18pm
Interesting Poe.....this makes me think of the current weather outside this week........HOT! .......I enjoyed it by jumping in the sprinklers at the playground with the kids at lunch........they wondered why the lady in the dress was able to go through and they have to wear bathing suits ; )
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28th Jul 2015 2:32pm
that's because you are the Boss
This weather always inspires this kind of ink from me
Gotta be good for something other than sweat
Thx L
This weather always inspires this kind of ink from me
Gotta be good for something other than sweat
Thx L
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28th Jul 2015 2:25pm
this leaves alot to imagine but at the same time it tell me what it is
i could see it as summer heat and relaxing on.
but i kinda see it as sweltering hot sex or self pleasure that came from drink a few to many drinks
i like this . really can connect to the wording
i could see it as summer heat and relaxing on.
but i kinda see it as sweltering hot sex or self pleasure that came from drink a few to many drinks
i like this . really can connect to the wording
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Re: Re. Thick
28th Jul 2015 2:33pm
To me it's a sex poem, based on summer and weather and desire
Others saw other things in it, but that's the wonder of poetry
Thx for commenting
Others saw other things in it, but that's the wonder of poetry
Thx for commenting
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28th Jul 2015 4:19pm
Poet a very spicy erotic.. heating up the room with your delicious ink.. need a shower now to cool me off ;) with love Brenda
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28th Jul 2015 4:29pm
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