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Red Stairs
there are roses on my stairs
for she comes home late
feeling dragged by the world
carrying a depressed weight
a challenge for her in life
is to make a smile
hoping red petals will blossom
her inner child
for she comes home late
feeling dragged by the world
carrying a depressed weight
a challenge for her in life
is to make a smile
hoping red petals will blossom
her inner child
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Re. Red Stairs
Anonymous
28th Jul 2015 3:50am
This is beyond beautiful, Sir DrunkenPlay. . .Excellent words woven here, from beginning to end; I felt every word. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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28th Jul 2015 3:18pm
Thank you Dev! I am glad to know this resonates with you. Appreciate hearing your comments.
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28th Jul 2015 6:49am
A woman's dream, yet in same a woman's need.. as appreciation is shown in such manners & more. .. What a beautiful feeling, as I only can imagine.
Lovely piece
Lovely piece
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28th Jul 2015 3:19pm
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28th Jul 2015 7:06pm
I imagine your friend has been having a rough time. Working hard, kids and a variety of complications, but she isn't one to wilt. Excellent work DPW.
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29th Jul 2015 2:28am
Thank you Crow for saying. No, she has had feeling of wilting in the past, but something inside her won't let her.
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31st Jul 2015 3:22pm
Thank you Taryn. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Women are complicated and at the same time, they are not. I have just learned to see the person as they are and the complications dissolve.
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30th Jul 2015 00:17am
Bringing it HOME! It's an active process, a doing, keeping love alive like Grae said. Well delivered piece.
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31st Jul 2015 3:25pm
I agree with you dartford, the inner child can save the world. Thank you for your comment.