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GMILF
Her hair is gray but shining
Still glossy after all these years
Experience settling comfortably on her skin
And weight up a pound or two
Just a tribute to the years
While her smile has gotten younger
Pretty fucking sly in fact
As she looks at him sidelong
Noticing she has the attention of an admirer
Would be delighted to make his acquaintance
Even more so to take him by the cock
And lead the way to bed
Where they will both pass the test of time
Then enjoy the night, come what may.
Still glossy after all these years
Experience settling comfortably on her skin
And weight up a pound or two
Just a tribute to the years
While her smile has gotten younger
Pretty fucking sly in fact
As she looks at him sidelong
Noticing she has the attention of an admirer
Would be delighted to make his acquaintance
Even more so to take him by the cock
And lead the way to bed
Where they will both pass the test of time
Then enjoy the night, come what may.
Published 23rd Jul 2015
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23rd Jul 2015 5:27pm
Sir Crow what a beautiful erotic so, loving is the description of this lady.. excellent with love Crim
23rd Jul 2015 5:39pm
23rd Jul 2015 8:16pm
I had a GMILF once. She was quite sexy. Confident, yet, honest. I think whats sexy about them, if you stick around long enough, you can see the young person in them at the same time. Shows me their mind is still young. Transforms their appearance. Good write, Crow. I agree with the line "experience settling comfortably on her skin..."
23rd Jul 2015 8:19pm
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23rd Jul 2015 8:55pm
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24th Jul 2015 2:08am
Ending on such a whimy with your 'come what may'..grins & ty's..
This...
"Experience settling comfortably on her skin"
and..
"While her smile has gotten younger
Pretty fucking sly in fact"
~favs.. sexy homage paid to the matriarch!
aaand o'course lmsao @ur 'gmilf'.. classic & I think you needs a shirt of..;)
well written & enjoyed, sir crow, good evenin to you,
~d
This...
"Experience settling comfortably on her skin"
and..
"While her smile has gotten younger
Pretty fucking sly in fact"
~favs.. sexy homage paid to the matriarch!
aaand o'course lmsao @ur 'gmilf'.. classic & I think you needs a shirt of..;)
well written & enjoyed, sir crow, good evenin to you,
~d
24th Jul 2015 8:00am
can see the fire in her eyes. always interested in a woman who's interested...
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24th Jul 2015 1:21pm
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2015 3:58am
Mmmmm Crow......about time someone wrote about a sexy grey haired woman......I'm going to look in the mirror and smile.....you've described me perfectly......you left out green eyes though.....I will forgive you......LOL!!! Seriously luved this passionate ink.....true beauty ages well when luved.....xo :)
29th Jul 2015 11:56pm
Every line was perfect. The build up grabbed me, because it starts with the subtleties that you always notice.
Her hair is gray but shining
Still glossy after all these years
It's something like that which trips a man up, when he's not on the prowl, not scoping, not expecting to notice, but he does. Glossy hair that would be soft to play with, brush and pet.
While her smile has gotten younger
Pretty fucking sly in fact
Escalation and the object of admiration becomes a subject of notice instead. And we all do notice, the unabashed sexuality in an older woman's smirk. It isn't a flood of in-your-face advertising from the crazy-sexy-cool set, which is what makes it all the more impacting. A slash of red in the night grabs the eyes. A flash of smile that says "I know what you're thinking" and clear motivation from a composed woman is a fucking laser beam. Sly, indeed.
Would be delighted to make his acquaintance
Even more so to take him by the cock
And lead the way to bed
Consciousness, self-awareness, without self-consciousness in the judgmental sense. Takes forever to reach. I think I made it halfway there as of last week and I'm halfway to dirt. But that acceptance of innate sexuality and self-ownership thereof, that intrinsic situation mastery from the finest handle, no pun intended. That's what the bold Queens have in spades, that allows them to make a meal of a lithe buck. Lead the way
Fucking classic. Thanks for releasing this. My reading list is totally full so this is going to be copied onto the laptop, with credit given.
Her hair is gray but shining
Still glossy after all these years
It's something like that which trips a man up, when he's not on the prowl, not scoping, not expecting to notice, but he does. Glossy hair that would be soft to play with, brush and pet.
While her smile has gotten younger
Pretty fucking sly in fact
Escalation and the object of admiration becomes a subject of notice instead. And we all do notice, the unabashed sexuality in an older woman's smirk. It isn't a flood of in-your-face advertising from the crazy-sexy-cool set, which is what makes it all the more impacting. A slash of red in the night grabs the eyes. A flash of smile that says "I know what you're thinking" and clear motivation from a composed woman is a fucking laser beam. Sly, indeed.
Would be delighted to make his acquaintance
Even more so to take him by the cock
And lead the way to bed
Consciousness, self-awareness, without self-consciousness in the judgmental sense. Takes forever to reach. I think I made it halfway there as of last week and I'm halfway to dirt. But that acceptance of innate sexuality and self-ownership thereof, that intrinsic situation mastery from the finest handle, no pun intended. That's what the bold Queens have in spades, that allows them to make a meal of a lithe buck. Lead the way
Fucking classic. Thanks for releasing this. My reading list is totally full so this is going to be copied onto the laptop, with credit given.
21st Aug 2015 11:50am
LOL. I come across this genre often in my traversals into the realm of digital sanity and I smile and feel there is hope for many years to come. Thank you, Sir Crow.
21st Aug 2015 7:36pm
