deepundergroundpoetry.com
moon shadows
She will be
Here and gone,
Like the sliver of moon
Waxing
Waning,
You can't see
But you know is there
Shining on the other side
Of dark
Here and gone,
Like the sliver of moon
Waxing
Waning,
You can't see
But you know is there
Shining on the other side
Of dark
Published 22nd Jul 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 0
comments 7
reads 757
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
22nd Jul 2015 4:47am
22nd Jul 2015 11:26pm
Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments …
"like trying to caress a shadow" … Yes, yes … sigh
22nd Jul 2015 9:19am
Interesting imagery, and the shadow of the Earth cloaks the Moon in darkness as she races around to daylight...
JJ
JJ
22nd Jul 2015 11:27pm
Thank You JJ For the read and interesting comments … much appreciated … chasing the light … yes !!
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2015 00:55am
<< post removed >>
23rd Jul 2015 3:15am
ThankYou Gabriel for the read and thoughtful comments..glad you liked the title...😊
13th Oct 2015 4:57pm
I love the simplicity of this, and how much it has to say with so little wording. Nicely done.
