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Cranial Meltdown
monday morning
and its hot as fuck
trying to find the words
that are somewhere stuck
It's the humidity
Not the heat
That boils my brain
On the city streets
Inspiration found
Rising in waves
Of hallucinations
In a yellow haze
Saturated colors
With a tint of gold
Thoughts evade me
But it beats the cold.
and its hot as fuck
trying to find the words
that are somewhere stuck
It's the humidity
Not the heat
That boils my brain
On the city streets
Inspiration found
Rising in waves
Of hallucinations
In a yellow haze
Saturated colors
With a tint of gold
Thoughts evade me
But it beats the cold.
Published 20th Jul 2015
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20th Jul 2015 8:08pm
My mind's in a puddle this morning but I sure got a kick out of this. Heat and humidity are not particularly conducive to creativity. Lethargy kicks in. At least you were able to crank out "Meltdown" and did an excellent job. "Of hallucinations / In a yellow haze." My haze is purple but has basically the same effect. Excuse me while I kiss the sky...
21st Jul 2015 9:53pm
Never kissed the sky, but have had mushroom pizza. Now that is a tasty dish.
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20th Jul 2015 9:17pm
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21st Jul 2015 9:54pm
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21st Jul 2015 1:24am
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21st Jul 2015 9:56pm
It took a bit for my pen to warm up. But I am happy with the results. All things considered, of course. Let me know when it gets cold over there, so I can warm you up. And then we will see which you prefer. ;)
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22nd Jul 2015 1:41am
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22nd Jul 2015 11:28pm
nothing like a cold and windy day
for me, but I really like the poem
anyway..:)
for me, but I really like the poem
anyway..:)
23rd Jul 2015 1:42am
5th Aug 2015 4:16am
Deep reach from this one. Keeping it brief and on. Half as long, twice as strong. Point expressed and eject! I like the punchiness of your work.
5th Aug 2015 2:06pm
