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a recollection...
I can't help
but notice
that her skirt
rises a little
up her thigh
as she sits
at the table
and I know
that however
the evening
goes after
this
is what I will
remember...
Published 19th Jul 2015
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19th Jul 2015 7:52am
19th Jul 2015 11:27pm
19th Jul 2015 10:35am
I would put this in my reading list, but I'm currently maxed out. Love the write, know the feeling.
19th Jul 2015 11:29pm
thanks, Indie, although
I can't help thinking
you'd have written
it better, damn it..!
:)
I can't help thinking
you'd have written
it better, damn it..!
:)
20th Jul 2015 2:22am
lol, not at all, don't discredit yourself. I love your style, if I didn't, I wouldn't keep coming back. ;)
19th Jul 2015 5:49pm
19th Jul 2015 11:30pm
