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The disappointed look upon your face. I fall into this hole all alone in this place called home. I'm stuck in this hole called home. There is no place like home, I think that's what is said. In the silence a tear falls as I sit on the bed, that's when I knew... I wrap my arms around your back and whisper I
Love you.
Love you.
Published 16th Jul 2015
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16th Jul 2015 7:23am
16th Jul 2015 8:03am
Marriage can be so brutal! But it can also be forgiving! Thanx for commenting!
17th Jul 2015 00:58am
Sweet and sour - the very nature of marriage and home - I recognise this to be so :-)
so well written, captures its mood perfectly :-)
so well written, captures its mood perfectly :-)
9th Dec 2015 8:31am
Sorry my reply took so long! I'm grateful to know, sadly, that marriage in all it's messy glory, is shared😧! Thanx mr. Macleod for commenting.
17th Jul 2015 2:51am
9th Dec 2015 8:34am
Once again, sorry my reply took so long. Thanx for commenting & glad you enjoyed😊!
17th Jul 2015 9:00am
I can really empathise with this. It can be very difficult at times . Most of the time actually?
1st Aug 2015 2:02pm
I'm sorry you can relate. But so glad you commented. It always helps to know people's thoughts! Thanx.
9th Dec 2015 5:43am
9th Dec 2015 8:24am
Sad how one can miss despite all the problems that most dismiss. Prayers to you my friend💝
