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no need to ask
You asked me to pretend, but there is nothing false about what I feel. I am a little scared I must admit. I've never felt this way before, you are my first of everything. I have confidence in letting you lead the way. I believe you are brave to want to bother with me, as I can be hard to tame. All I wish is those oceans to dry up and I can begin my pilgrimage into your arms.
Published 15th Jul 2015
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13th Jan 2016 3:08am
Tears can be like oceans sometimes, and the waiting for them to dry can seem like an eternity. Also, methinks whenever new people meet there must always be a sense of bravery since trusting requires taking a chance always. This is a lovely poem, very beautiful and filled with depth! Well written... it is the first of your poems I have read actually and I must say I do indeed like it a lot. :)
13th Jan 2016 5:57am
