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Forge of the night
Moon-Drenched murmur of living light
Ripples sinuous across the silebrant twist of braided force
To mount the rise of blessed adoration
Consummate!
Carnate!
Endless stretched the thrumming verdant dance of corded strength
To Shift, to press deep into the embrace of raw scarlet abandon
Gripped within glorious fervour
Immersed deep in nectar of molten ardour
Quickened in the essence of ecstasy's regal flower
Quiverslick petals open to the shivering storm of the breaking wave
Crimson tide rising to the height of starfire
Bursting in conflagration of searing unity
Of carnal duality of pure divinity,
A prayer howled into the vastness,
The chaotic void of the multiverse.
Ripples sinuous across the silebrant twist of braided force
To mount the rise of blessed adoration
Consummate!
Carnate!
Endless stretched the thrumming verdant dance of corded strength
To Shift, to press deep into the embrace of raw scarlet abandon
Gripped within glorious fervour
Immersed deep in nectar of molten ardour
Quickened in the essence of ecstasy's regal flower
Quiverslick petals open to the shivering storm of the breaking wave
Crimson tide rising to the height of starfire
Bursting in conflagration of searing unity
Of carnal duality of pure divinity,
A prayer howled into the vastness,
The chaotic void of the multiverse.
Published 14th Jul 2015
| Edited 15th Jul 2015
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14th Jul 2015 10:53pm
Welcome to DUP
this pretty nice, I liked the mood of it it was sensual and it had a soothing theme to it.
But may I suggest that you shrink your writing a bit so that your words don't look cluttered.
this pretty nice, I liked the mood of it it was sensual and it had a soothing theme to it.
But may I suggest that you shrink your writing a bit so that your words don't look cluttered.
15th Jul 2015 1:38am
Thankyou, I actually added this from a mobile device and it appears to have lost some form structure which i have now corrected. I Am glade you enjoyed it!
15th Jul 2015 10:07am
Stormchild, luv ~ :-*
This is simply breathtaking. What is this word: silebrant, luv? I am not familiar with it and would know of it if you would not mind teaching me. I like the sound of it, if I am pronouncing it correctly, though I do not know as I cannot yet locate it. I will continue my search. You have intrigued me, luv. :-*
You play with language with such facility. I am enamored of "Quiverslick" and find this poem of yours a conflagration in its own right, setting night skies ablaze with torches of desire combined with shimmering waters imbued with flames of starshine... ;-*
You are rather exquisitely clever and adroit, bending language with great skill. :-*
This is simply breathtaking. What is this word: silebrant, luv? I am not familiar with it and would know of it if you would not mind teaching me. I like the sound of it, if I am pronouncing it correctly, though I do not know as I cannot yet locate it. I will continue my search. You have intrigued me, luv. :-*
You play with language with such facility. I am enamored of "Quiverslick" and find this poem of yours a conflagration in its own right, setting night skies ablaze with torches of desire combined with shimmering waters imbued with flames of starshine... ;-*
You are rather exquisitely clever and adroit, bending language with great skill. :-*
15th Jul 2015 2:29pm
Thankyou Savaja, I have read through much of your work on here and like it a lot So it is a huge compliment to have such praise for my efforts.
I do like to run with words and take them for a walk through metaphor and trust them together sometimes so to "Silebrant"
It's Contruct word I use, I built it in a sense as I like to mix up languages, phonetic meaning and concepts so this is a mix of the German "Seele brennt" literally meaning "soul burn" a corruption of "sinuous" and "celebrant" and the overarch of the word in sound said in English which conveys movement in a snakelike way, smooth, strong and masculine in a sexual context.
I do like to run with words and take them for a walk through metaphor and trust them together sometimes so to "Silebrant"
It's Contruct word I use, I built it in a sense as I like to mix up languages, phonetic meaning and concepts so this is a mix of the German "Seele brennt" literally meaning "soul burn" a corruption of "sinuous" and "celebrant" and the overarch of the word in sound said in English which conveys movement in a snakelike way, smooth, strong and masculine in a sexual context.
Stormchild, luv ~ :-*
Thank YOU. What an honor you gift me with your words of praise! :-*
It IS rather a marvelously constructed word. I like it very much, luv. ;-D Tis deliciousness incarnate. Mmm... I may request your permission to use your construct sometime, by your leave, of course... :-*
Thank YOU. What an honor you gift me with your words of praise! :-*
It IS rather a marvelously constructed word. I like it very much, luv. ;-D Tis deliciousness incarnate. Mmm... I may request your permission to use your construct sometime, by your leave, of course... :-*
15th Jul 2015 8:32pm
