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demons dance
He said "show me your demons Love, let them dance with mine."
"Allow me to lead you into the flames of your fears."
And I found in me the strength to follow.
With the freedom of a child I gave myself to him as a gift.
I disrobed, stood naked before him, to show him what was now his.
I became a slave to his pain.
However my body betrayed me when he disciplined, it thrilled me so.
My nipples erect, body trembling with anticipation, I bent to my master.
Begged to be fucked, to be possessed completely.
He tied me to his bed.
Felt his teeth in the flesh of my tits, then sucking them as if I gave mothers milk.
Turned on close to madness, my clit hard and aching, it was excruciating, and exquisite.
I needed release like a drowning man needs oxygen.
"Please Master! Now!"
He stopped and stared straight into my crazed eyes.
He whispered "I want to invade your everything, live in your mind and body."
I whispered back "You own me." "You can have my soul."
He thrust his cock into my waiting cunt, filled me so hard and deep, when he came he might have cum out my ears.
And my release gave me a peace I had never known.
He stayed inside me a long while, when he pulled out I cried.
"what my love?"
"I wanted you inside me forever."
He dipped two fingers in me, and put them in my mouth to taste us together.
"I am your Master, you are mine, and I am your protector. We are bound forever love."
I smiled, and fell asleep in Masters arms.
"Allow me to lead you into the flames of your fears."
And I found in me the strength to follow.
With the freedom of a child I gave myself to him as a gift.
I disrobed, stood naked before him, to show him what was now his.
I became a slave to his pain.
However my body betrayed me when he disciplined, it thrilled me so.
My nipples erect, body trembling with anticipation, I bent to my master.
Begged to be fucked, to be possessed completely.
He tied me to his bed.
Felt his teeth in the flesh of my tits, then sucking them as if I gave mothers milk.
Turned on close to madness, my clit hard and aching, it was excruciating, and exquisite.
I needed release like a drowning man needs oxygen.
"Please Master! Now!"
He stopped and stared straight into my crazed eyes.
He whispered "I want to invade your everything, live in your mind and body."
I whispered back "You own me." "You can have my soul."
He thrust his cock into my waiting cunt, filled me so hard and deep, when he came he might have cum out my ears.
And my release gave me a peace I had never known.
He stayed inside me a long while, when he pulled out I cried.
"what my love?"
"I wanted you inside me forever."
He dipped two fingers in me, and put them in my mouth to taste us together.
"I am your Master, you are mine, and I am your protector. We are bound forever love."
I smiled, and fell asleep in Masters arms.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 13th Jul 2015
| Edited 14th Jul 2015
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re: Re: demons dance
14th Jul 2015 3:01am
Oops, I replied in a new comment box. My reply to you is one below this. 💋 lol
Re: demons dance
14th Jul 2015 3:00am
Oh thank you so much. Its so nice that there are others who find the beauty in that, it was such a special moment for me. Thanks for reading Taryn, I truly appreciate any feedback. These poems are my first attempt at erotic poetry, and using my experiences makes me very vulnerable. But that can be good.
Re: demons dance
14th Jul 2015 3:05am
Beautiful. The lines whispered to us, but with forces of passion that we can not resist. Very well written.
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14th Jul 2015 3:22am
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm new to erotic poetry, and hungry for feedback. Bless you. 💋
Re: demons dance
14th Jul 2015 4:48am
purgeful poetry. there is a joyful place, when you have someone to lead you there...
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14th Jul 2015 5:15am
Yes, it can be. And being led can be misleading, the ability to give up control and allowing someone to have it takes strength. Courage. If you trust that person implicitly, then there is freedom and empowerment in giving yourself completely. 💋
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14th Jul 2015 6:48am
You Jennifer are a seductress,, strait up!
u had me at Child's gift!!
POW!
in the list!!!
love
Zazzles xoxoox
U are some kid of talent..
u had me at Child's gift!!
POW!
in the list!!!
love
Zazzles xoxoox
U are some kid of talent..
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14th Jul 2015 7:54pm
Ahhh, calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
You write with an intense eroticism manifesting the strength of your connection.
There is nothing so exquisite as the taste of two combined...
You elucidate that with ineluctably delectable poesy, luv. ;-*
You write with an intense eroticism manifesting the strength of your connection.
There is nothing so exquisite as the taste of two combined...
You elucidate that with ineluctably delectable poesy, luv. ;-*
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14th Jul 2015 8:10pm
I'm blown away by your wonderful comment. I had hoped I could bring the intensity and beauty of the interaction without it being trashy. Because to me it was total intimacy and trust
I do hope you'll read more of my work, I'm mew and hungry for feedback. I will of course ne reading yours. 💋 Jennifer
I do hope you'll read more of my work, I'm mew and hungry for feedback. I will of course ne reading yours. 💋 Jennifer
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14th Jul 2015 11:49pm
Ahhh, luv ~ :-*
I've read all your works thus far. I went back and did so. Your voice is unique and driven by this intensity I've referenced and a certain purity of essence.
Thank you for your attention to my works, luv. You are quite gracious. :-*
I've read all your works thus far. I went back and did so. Your voice is unique and driven by this intensity I've referenced and a certain purity of essence.
Thank you for your attention to my works, luv. You are quite gracious. :-*
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14th Jul 2015 8:23pm
Very intense and erotic! I love the demon dance! ;) Nice to read your work.
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2015 5:12am
I read the poem and all the comments. You're not just a brilliant erotic writer but also a brave one. I was no good at writing until I realized that one had to bare the soul. So, yes, you exposed your own vulnerability, but the plaudits have justified that brazen honesty and you won respect. You certainly have mine.
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1st Aug 2015 1:34pm
Mmm, I have tears in my eyes. Thank you so much, honered to have your respect. This (this poetry) was something I needed to do. I am driven by creativity, need its release to keep me in peace. I go to my sketchbook most times, but I wanted so much to be able to show the beauty and empowering forces in submission. I knew I had to be unapologetic, and extremely honest. This place, DU has been a wonderful world to do it in. There is a fellowship here. I appreciate this comment more than you'll ever know. A 💋 kiss on your forhead Sir.
Re. demons dance
2nd Aug 2015 7:28am
wow this one definitely wicked and hot... you are a queen of erotica... keep flowing that fire :D
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2020 9:42pm
To be possessed and dominated, very thrilling indeed. Such a perfect structure, flow, and expressions. I look forward to you showing me your demons as I read more of your writing.
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