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Not again
Tell me that I tried
Tell me the truth
Tell me I lied
I did it again
I never learn
I never win
Paint me red
Pail me perfect
Pain me dead
I did a sin
I am a concern
I am wore thin
No control shown
Empty and satisfied
Its a fault of my own
I did it again
I'll never learn
I never win
Shaded jaded perfect
Pathetic graded dead skin
Of desire and effect
I'll never win
I'll never learn
I do it again and again.
Tell me the truth
Tell me I lied
I did it again
I never learn
I never win
Paint me red
Pail me perfect
Pain me dead
I did a sin
I am a concern
I am wore thin
No control shown
Empty and satisfied
Its a fault of my own
I did it again
I'll never learn
I never win
Shaded jaded perfect
Pathetic graded dead skin
Of desire and effect
I'll never win
I'll never learn
I do it again and again.
Published 10th Jul 2015
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10th Jul 2015 5:53am
"Shaded jaded perfect
Pathetic graded dead skin"
~unholy sighs, dear.. this is darkly gorgeous!
I am feeling the echo & reading the held breath here, misterz poet..
Great word choices, sharply put too.. she sez.
Very endless, this feeling. I relate also to
"Empty and satisfied" *effective
sweet dayz to you!
~d
Pathetic graded dead skin"
~unholy sighs, dear.. this is darkly gorgeous!
I am feeling the echo & reading the held breath here, misterz poet..
Great word choices, sharply put too.. she sez.
Very endless, this feeling. I relate also to
"Empty and satisfied" *effective
sweet dayz to you!
~d
10th Jul 2015 6:08am
Thank you, your darkness your words are appreciated and I am glad you could relate.
Sweet night to you!
Sweet night to you!
10th Jul 2015 10:09am
10th Jul 2015 11:11am
Indeed my friend, indeed. Thanks for dropping by and adding a comment, I appreciate it man.
10th Jul 2015 12:12pm
I love the lyrical alignments of your write ,.
Each time I go through em, I'm always on some vocal keys.
Nice write.
Each time I go through em, I'm always on some vocal keys.
Nice write.
1st Aug 2015 2:38am
14th Jul 2015 5:52am
I loved the echo effect of this poem and the words you chose to put it all together. Excellent work x
15th Jul 2015 2:34am
Thank you beautiful manic, your kind words and though are greatly appreciated!
