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The Big Beneath

She tries to pick a catchy name
And finally opts for "Betty Blue"
But refuses to accept the blame
If it doesn't quite ring true

"Betty" selects her patsy well
A schmuck too short on luck
For a price she's going to give him hell
And throw in his final fuck

She rides him 'til the rising sun
Slamming him on top
Somehow manages to lift his gun
Then squeeze him for every drop

He still can't seem to comprehend
Why she'd nail him for his cash
Then saying "Sorry babe looks like the end
You're going out with the trash"

"Betty" drops him in the nearest bin
Just as his black bag starts to drip
Says "Sweet babe paid the price for sin
But it was worth the trip."
Written by crowfly
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