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To a Crown Abhorred
I am daughter, eldest and heir
chagrined into darker winds.
Clear burdens float awash, un-sinned.
Maker whispers me.. "just blend"..
Primed drops pool, fresh undulate fell
shed jewels chilled unto sky..
Maker gifts thorny world my swell,
orbs soak earth in endless cry.
As eldest allows no weakness-
"Douse it only if justified."
Standing tall proud retainer
to a crown abhorred, am I.
Published 6th Jul 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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6th Jul 2015 12:40pm
Ah, the responsibilities of family and honor can far outweigh those of personal wishes and desires.
I am the eldest as well. Good write, darksighing one.
I am the eldest as well. Good write, darksighing one.
6th Jul 2015 5:44pm
So happy to be blessed w/u m'lady!
did quite a bit of dousing last nte, to be sure..
Eldest you, I can tell by your strong understanding
of *all in ur writes, tyty!
~d
did quite a bit of dousing last nte, to be sure..
Eldest you, I can tell by your strong understanding
of *all in ur writes, tyty!
~d
6th Jul 2015 6:09pm
tryin only to exist m'love.. I only know peace is
easy, naught else. ty Michael!
hugs & nuzzle bk..
~T
easy, naught else. ty Michael!
hugs & nuzzle bk..
~T
6th Jul 2015 3:32pm
o, darky beloved
.....a skwirllin'dervish
of wordimagined
down, not downy,
as accords such heady royalty------
get that?
6th Jul 2015 6:17pm
"get that?" ... oh I gotts-it! ..and grin darkened
huggs of thx to you m'dear!
curtsies low enuf to drop m'damn crown a moment!
;)
~d
huggs of thx to you m'dear!
curtsies low enuf to drop m'damn crown a moment!
;)
~d
6th Jul 2015 4:00pm
heavy weighs the crown.."As eldest allows no weakness"..heavy is this vibe...your plight exquisitely conveyed
6th Jul 2015 6:21pm
and heavy are my thanx to you darlin!
always amazin' to have you here misters..
great days be yours ;)
~d
always amazin' to have you here misters..
great days be yours ;)
~d
