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Romance Dance~
Dripping from the faucet; and the
scurrie from our feet are the only
sounds; We pass as one; Gently
my hand in yours; bodies close;
We dance along romance; softened
in those brief moments;
My beating breasts against your
chest; in private; it was beautiful;
My slow touch;
that was touched back
scurrie from our feet are the only
sounds; We pass as one; Gently
my hand in yours; bodies close;
We dance along romance; softened
in those brief moments;
My beating breasts against your
chest; in private; it was beautiful;
My slow touch;
that was touched back
Published 1st Jul 2015
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1st Jul 2015 7:13pm
Very romantic with just a touch of eroticism. Probably not a tango but it works for me. Great job Tommie!
1st Jul 2015 7:30pm
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1st Jul 2015 8:38pm
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1st Jul 2015 9:11pm
1st Jul 2015 10:31pm
Both pic and poem heart warming with erotic edge in the last two lines. Pic speaks of a couple rich in love more than money.
2nd Jul 2015 12:26pm
Anonymous
1st Jul 2015 10:48pm
Tommie Lynn,
Now that's a two-step and a half! Loved your line:
"We pass as one"
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Now that's a two-step and a half! Loved your line:
"We pass as one"
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
2nd Jul 2015 12:27pm
2nd Jul 2015 6:20am
I like the easy rural setting, Tommie. can hear the crickets chirping outside in the moonlight...
2nd Jul 2015 12:30pm
