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On Tap
My love, always on tap for me,
Soft eyes always in sacred plea.
Yes God gave her three holes to fill.
In every one she needs that spill.
With pierce on tongue, she milks that vein.
Yet claws and bites, in hopes of pain
Returned to silk flesh, soft and white,
And stretching of holes, evertight.
So beautiful, spread in display,
Insert four fingers, let them splay.
Watch her soft gasp, her arching back…
Then add thumb too, watch her react.
Hips off the bed, planting her feet,
Her own fingers delving ass deep.
With my cock in full-slide down throat,
Holding her head to bring that choke.
Her free hand sinks claws to my flesh,
As her cunts spasms a sweet mess.
And fucking her face to the hilt,
In convulsing throat I am spilt.
Then placing arm beneath that arch,
I lift her, hand in cunt, and march
Across the room to the oak chest,
Dropping to knees, and suckling breasts.
Elbow on chest, fist up I pull
My baby, wound tight, down this spool.
Her knees bending, she knows the drill…
I want that cunt completely filled.
Juices a’drip, hand in my hair,
I watch her work it down to there!
With other hand at her back side,
Adding more fingers to the ride.
One of my shoulders dripping blood
From her nails as she finds flood,
I bite her nipple hard and shove
As far as I can up my love.
‘Pon arm exit, I’m hard again
As bruised-laced knees hit floor in bend.
Before me, her choice most adored,
Spreading ass-cheeks, baby wants more.
Published 1st Jul 2015
| Edited 4th Jul 2015
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1st Jul 2015 4:00pm
WOW, WOW, WOW OMG, That was an amazing story and think I shall now go find either toy for fun or shower to cool down, phew. Such power and graphic telling of the story and the gentle ending of spooning together, wonderful amazing read Michael
1st Jul 2015 5:24pm
:) thank you so much for gracing my page and commenting, moonlightdreams. Your excitement towards the piece is much appreciated.
Michael
Michael
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1st Jul 2015 5:20pm
Thank you Taryn. Tingles are good I've been told. :) glad you enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
1st Jul 2015 7:20pm
i usually find rhyme difficult to enjoy, moreso in erotic, but it works so well here with your diction...
... absolutely adore the balance of language, coarse melding with refined so seamlessly
a steller write, a steamy read
*
merci & mercy
~k
... absolutely adore the balance of language, coarse melding with refined so seamlessly
a steller write, a steamy read
*
merci & mercy
~k
1st Jul 2015 8:39pm
I usually strive for true rhyme all throughout a piece, but in this one I let go a lil, hoping content would make up for it. :) merci beaucoup for a most gracious comment.
Michael
Michael
1st Jul 2015 7:27pm
*drip
T is evertight on-tap.. and *this is yumm darlin!
"Yet claws and bites, in hopes of pain"
~oh gddss you soo know! *kisskiss
"With my cock in full-slide down throat,
Holding her head to bring that choke."
*suckling this one babe, omg to your thots!
"Then placing arm beneath that arch,
I lift her, hand in cunt, and march
Across the room to the oak chest,
Dropping to knees, and suckling breasts."
~this one puddled me, yesss plsss?
"Before me, her choice most adored,
In spoon form, baby still wants more"
~aaaall-ways yes.
loved this and loves you!
~T
T is evertight on-tap.. and *this is yumm darlin!
"Yet claws and bites, in hopes of pain"
~oh gddss you soo know! *kisskiss
"With my cock in full-slide down throat,
Holding her head to bring that choke."
*suckling this one babe, omg to your thots!
"Then placing arm beneath that arch,
I lift her, hand in cunt, and march
Across the room to the oak chest,
Dropping to knees, and suckling breasts."
~this one puddled me, yesss plsss?
"Before me, her choice most adored,
In spoon form, baby still wants more"
~aaaall-ways yes.
loved this and loves you!
~T
1st Jul 2015 8:43pm
Lol, I hope when I told you I posted for you that you didn't read the other one first... Yikes, in for a spankin' if you did. This was it, love and I am so pleased you found it warming. I aim to *puddle you yanno.
love you, sweets.
Michael
love you, sweets.
Michael
