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The Qualifier (Polyamory entry)
The Qualifier
I had a heart, with a concave tunnel, thirsty for filling.
She was the one under limp down-light, holes in the tights
in practical places, open for the eye.
He was stroking her leg, lips swollen, as if bitten,
skin like cotton reed paper,
a large qualifier.
I wanted the safety of their narrow, peeking, crevices.
I pulled, south, my skirt, fluffed the long, ebony hair off my shoulders
and paraded towards them,
imagining tweaking her nipples until she wept.
It was not the first time I'd been wet for the sharer platter,
certainly not the last - it was an easy circuit
and a get in,
get out game.
I had a heart, with a concave tunnel, thirsty for filling.
She was the one under limp down-light, holes in the tights
in practical places, open for the eye.
He was stroking her leg, lips swollen, as if bitten,
skin like cotton reed paper,
a large qualifier.
I wanted the safety of their narrow, peeking, crevices.
I pulled, south, my skirt, fluffed the long, ebony hair off my shoulders
and paraded towards them,
imagining tweaking her nipples until she wept.
It was not the first time I'd been wet for the sharer platter,
certainly not the last - it was an easy circuit
and a get in,
get out game.
Published 28th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2015 7:43pm
I read this in the polyamory competition thread, and it's just stunning, so I came to leave a comment. It's very subtle in its erotic description, and this works so well, adding to the atmosphere of secrecy, experimentation, all things hidden.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
29th Jun 2015 9:31pm
Thank you, MDM, I appreciate your input. It's lovely to hear the reception from a reader!
30th Jun 2015 5:12am
peering in the dim light, stimulated by the odor of sex in the air. casual & quick, take what you need & get out...
1st Jul 2015 6:40am
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2015 2:02pm
You put your thoughts out there in a unique way for all your readers to understand, and smile with that understanding. Gotta love it! I do.
3rd Aug 2015 3:03pm
13th Aug 2015 4:56pm
Holes in the tights, in practical places, open for the eye. Wonderful! I pulled south my skirt. Umm. Your voice is one of a kind. Dig this! 💋
13th Aug 2015 9:30pm
Thank you for reading this, Jennifer. I am glad it served the purpose and amused throughout.
