PEACE

Thank you Sansaint! I am glad that you found this piece uplifting...that makes me happy.. Thank you for the encouragement.

i love a good haiku. this one is gentle and loving and hopeful. well done.

Thank you Larkspur! I love Haiku as well...to me it exemplifies the art of using an economy of words to convey deep meaning.

Exactly. I like tanka as well. Compact styles/forms force you to choose words very carefully. A very fun challenge. You can't just go willy nilly on the page.

I'll have to explore tanka...thanks for the mention. I am even known to write in Shakespearean sonnet style when I get thew urge and that's a challenge as well.

One word: GORGEOUS!

Thank you so much, Crow!

i agree with everything written above, gorgeous, concise, effective, moving... have i said absolutely fucking gorgeous yet?
loveeeeed this!

Thank you so much Katja! I love writing in haiku form. That one can express deep and intimate ideas, straight from the soul, in a mere 17 syllables is a beautiful thing.

Peaceful! Beautiful! Enjoyed GW :)

Thank you Tommie! You validate my efforts.

You've done a good job GW creating a serene atmosphere with this wonderful haiku.

Thank you Vee! I'm glad you felt the serenity in the piece.