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We Play ..."One?"
I stand small, pale n'straddle
facing eager 'bove your lap.
I fire-toss long smokey greens
deep bourbons smolder back.
Our eyes never gaze a'stray
my skirt I lift..a peek of shape.
Moist petals swell warm on nub
pink flesh begs.. for your tongue.
In your ear I whisper.. "One?"
One shared look, as my hips swirl
arms lay me back on lap, half-curl.
Exposing folds, puff-soaked through
"Make me come on 'One' for you?"
One finger deep inside each ache
your tongue gracin' tight wall space.
One lick, One push, One wrist twist.
breath teases flesh, warm nuzzled grace
Need One deep suck to cream your face.
Tang-sweet, dulcet trickle-spread
hot mouth to thigh in glisten'd mess.
Fingers still sunk deep push-twirl
lips press open-mouthed, my pearl.
Kisses lay wet heat, both end's my core
Eyes gleam "possession," head dips to more.
Fingers unlace thighs in small hand squeeze
my 'One' slides in, wraps your finger tease.
A twitch to your stem, I watch as you feed.
Drink juices of ownership, face wet with me.
Wholly connected, I cream your suck within
Licking both our fingers, I whisper, "..you win.."
facing eager 'bove your lap.
I fire-toss long smokey greens
deep bourbons smolder back.
Our eyes never gaze a'stray
my skirt I lift..a peek of shape.
Moist petals swell warm on nub
pink flesh begs.. for your tongue.
In your ear I whisper.. "One?"
One shared look, as my hips swirl
arms lay me back on lap, half-curl.
Exposing folds, puff-soaked through
"Make me come on 'One' for you?"
One finger deep inside each ache
your tongue gracin' tight wall space.
One lick, One push, One wrist twist.
breath teases flesh, warm nuzzled grace
Need One deep suck to cream your face.
Tang-sweet, dulcet trickle-spread
hot mouth to thigh in glisten'd mess.
Fingers still sunk deep push-twirl
lips press open-mouthed, my pearl.
Kisses lay wet heat, both end's my core
Eyes gleam "possession," head dips to more.
Fingers unlace thighs in small hand squeeze
my 'One' slides in, wraps your finger tease.
A twitch to your stem, I watch as you feed.
Drink juices of ownership, face wet with me.
Wholly connected, I cream your suck within
Licking both our fingers, I whisper, "..you win.."
Published 23rd Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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23rd Jun 2015 12:42pm
One finger deep inside each ache
your tongue gracin' tight wall space..made it real cum
your tongue gracin' tight wall space..made it real cum
23rd Jun 2015 1:38pm
23rd Jun 2015 1:11pm
fucking hell, i spilled coffee in my lap when i read "Need One deep suck to cream your face."
we need a "put down hot beverages" warning please & thank you... save my thighs third degree burns & such...
... sighs you gots me all squirmy with this one, sister. just purrrrfectly sensual xoxo
we need a "put down hot beverages" warning please & thank you... save my thighs third degree burns & such...
... sighs you gots me all squirmy with this one, sister. just purrrrfectly sensual xoxo
23rd Jun 2015 1:44pm
Ha!!.. gotta say, I put drinks faaar outa sight
when peekin into you or sweet Taryn.. too many
damned hot spills & laughin fits! (ex? ..birds!)*g
gawds ta morn!..join me fer *toddy-time, won't you?
ty ever-much fer ur irreplaceable squirms m'darlin!
wicked curtseyz, devious smirks..& luvz
~d
when peekin into you or sweet Taryn.. too many
damned hot spills & laughin fits! (ex? ..birds!)*g
gawds ta morn!..join me fer *toddy-time, won't you?
ty ever-much fer ur irreplaceable squirms m'darlin!
wicked curtseyz, devious smirks..& luvz
~d
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23rd Jun 2015 2:11pm
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23rd Jun 2015 3:59pm
I sooo fleckin luvzu Taryn!
(lurin her back wif sweetest words..& wicked tones)
smirks are urs fer the bk away..lmsao alwyz
I was in fits of *miss 'n duz pour a bit more *Blam!* than I'd meant.. was gonna be soft, I swear!.. next time k? (softer & I won't be so loud) ;) <~ sorries, the devious smile escaped..
luvza lotts me-sis-of-smutties!
~d
(lurin her back wif sweetest words..& wicked tones)
smirks are urs fer the bk away..lmsao alwyz
I was in fits of *miss 'n duz pour a bit more *Blam!* than I'd meant.. was gonna be soft, I swear!.. next time k? (softer & I won't be so loud) ;) <~ sorries, the devious smile escaped..
luvza lotts me-sis-of-smutties!
~d
23rd Jun 2015 5:25pm
golly,gee....wish eye could 'win' like that.
oh,
you
Hard
rite
to reed
when them
nec
tar s f l o w..........
23rd Jun 2015 8:38pm
Grins sweet-misterz!
..u remind that I left any mention of neck tippin'
back en-flow..woops!
(To self: must (w)rite the "neck" smuttie nxt)..
Seee?.. need ur wits around here ;) Love havin' you
fer visits Sirz of D, all-time!
shiny smirks ur way m'dears..
~d
..u remind that I left any mention of neck tippin'
back en-flow..woops!
(To self: must (w)rite the "neck" smuttie nxt)..
Seee?.. need ur wits around here ;) Love havin' you
fer visits Sirz of D, all-time!
shiny smirks ur way m'dears..
~d
24th Jun 2015 2:16am
"Seee?.. need ur wits around here"
precious few
precious few need any thing from 'me',
at any di'stance.......
Woe!
24th Jun 2015 3:56am
precious few are *ever vera special..
(or see it, fer the the matter) buttttt
I shall jus' keep readin' your snarkies of wit
& sayin it then..
hva great nite m'dear
*lil cackles
~d
(or see it, fer the the matter) buttttt
I shall jus' keep readin' your snarkies of wit
& sayin it then..
hva great nite m'dear
*lil cackles
~d
23rd Jun 2015 10:17pm
..um... "one?"..(voice shiver)
*the look here, hard too, My Baby
of a mind to maul u fer stroking my
page y'knw? (yes you do)
everloves
~T
*the look here, hard too, My Baby
of a mind to maul u fer stroking my
page y'knw? (yes you do)
everloves
~T
9th Jul 2015 5:27am
Perfectly written
soft subtle undertones of erotic moments
shared
this is how to write erotica
leaving the reader to use there imaginative mind
is always a good thing
hard to pull off but you've achieved it here.
soft subtle undertones of erotic moments
shared
this is how to write erotica
leaving the reader to use there imaginative mind
is always a good thing
hard to pull off but you've achieved it here.
9th Jul 2015 7:38am
O' ~sweet poetess, you have made my hours fer a comment so warm and gratifying, tyty!
this mind of yours, is quickly making me luv your
worx..good to have u ;)
be ever well!
~d
this mind of yours, is quickly making me luv your
worx..good to have u ;)
be ever well!
~d
