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CHARLESTON
That’s not rebel blood on snow white cotton fields
Or on press white shirts of my brethren choir
That’s not my flag or my story nightly told
That’s not my full containers or cargo no longer human
But those are my chains - my rope tied to history
On angel oak or tied on cypress stump
And that’s my voice that hymns
Let My People Go
And those the holy lamb where the sun hung highest
Fell
And those the lion’s mane that shook as proud heads
Fell
Upon that last light on our dark skin as dark as night
Fell
This was the fresh blood of the barber the baseball player
The mother the church goer - this was not rebel blood
But that of those who believed in something not against it
And in the warm salt air of the sea their voices shall be heard
Shouting high above the gun shot
High above the roofs
Once more - we forgive
Or on press white shirts of my brethren choir
That’s not my flag or my story nightly told
That’s not my full containers or cargo no longer human
But those are my chains - my rope tied to history
On angel oak or tied on cypress stump
And that’s my voice that hymns
Let My People Go
And those the holy lamb where the sun hung highest
Fell
And those the lion’s mane that shook as proud heads
Fell
Upon that last light on our dark skin as dark as night
Fell
This was the fresh blood of the barber the baseball player
The mother the church goer - this was not rebel blood
But that of those who believed in something not against it
And in the warm salt air of the sea their voices shall be heard
Shouting high above the gun shot
High above the roofs
Once more - we forgive
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Re: CHARLESTON
21st Jun 2015 7:29pm
O.M.G. This is SO unimaginably profound with truth it seeps into my spirit.
Take down the flag and stop this madness now.
Take down the flag and stop this madness now.
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
21st Jun 2015 9:37pm
Re: CHARLESTON
21st Jun 2015 10:57pm
to give someone a 'gift'
of a gun...
of the many things I do not understand
this...
of a gun...
of the many things I do not understand
this...
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
22nd Jun 2015 3:50am
Re: CHARLESTON
Anonymous
21st Jun 2015 10:58pm
Whale I'm full of emotions of the few last things I've just read......this makes my tears fall even more......beautiful tribute those who fell at the hands of another......tipping my pen to you in respect.....xo :)
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
22nd Jun 2015 3:51am
Re: CHARLESTON
21st Jun 2015 11:18pm
I've been trying to write about what happened and the hate seems to seep into it every time. The world doesn't need any more hate. There's immense sorrow, pain and regret in this, but no hate, and that gives me a little hope.
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
22nd Jun 2015 3:52am
Thanks DM - the anger and the hatred sometimes over powers us - thanks for respondin to this message of peace and remebering the 9 - please pass this on
Re: CHARLESTON
21st Jun 2015 11:32pm
Oh my. This is....
I cannot come up with the word that means what I want. It is simple beauty and complex emotions and hope. Well done.
I cannot come up with the word that means what I want. It is simple beauty and complex emotions and hope. Well done.
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
22nd Jun 2015 3:55am
Thanks for stepping forward Larkspur and responding to this message of peace please pass it on
Re: CHARLESTON
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2015 2:42am
perfect.
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
22nd Jun 2015 3:56am
The very birds are mute - thank you for responding to this message of peace 156 - please pass it on
Re: CHARLESTON
22nd Jun 2015 5:52am
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22nd Jun 2015 10:57am
Hey Atakti - great to have you here and responding to this message of peace - please pass it on
Re: CHARLESTON
23rd Jun 2015 1:50am
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23rd Jun 2015 6:28am
Hey FlowerChild - thank you for stopping by and commenting and representing for peace - please pass it on
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23rd Jun 2015 2:03am
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23rd Jun 2015 6:29am
Thank you boomBOX for being here - and responding to this message of peace - please pass it on
Re: CHARLESTON
25th Jun 2015 6:33pm
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26th Jun 2015 6:40pm
Re: CHARLESTON
25th Jun 2015 7:22pm
a fine goal for a poet is to write about these
tragedies that are happening all over and so
often as you have in this poem and writing of
the misadventures and adventures of sex and
getting high secondary however covering all bases
is what makes writing poetry so lively
tragedies that are happening all over and so
often as you have in this poem and writing of
the misadventures and adventures of sex and
getting high secondary however covering all bases
is what makes writing poetry so lively
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re: Re: CHARLESTON
26th Jun 2015 6:41pm
yes poetry is the human voice and voices distilled in pursuit of truth - all of the voices are valuable
Re: CHARLESTON
27th Jun 2015 10:04pm
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29th Jun 2015 5:26pm