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Living Beings Walking Souls
As the darkness grows.
Our people rise.
From the hidden shadows of nowhere.
Nothingness, Blank, we weren't there.
Just shadows of our dead souls and their pain.
But now we shall rise.
From spirits to shadows to human beings.
Living Beings, Walking Souls.
That is what we'll become as soon as you care for us.
You may call us demons,
Vampires and such,
Beasts or brutes
Call us whatever as we don't care as you didn't care for us.
It's your turn to feel what we felt.
Ignorance and hatred.
Our people rise.
From the hidden shadows of nowhere.
Nothingness, Blank, we weren't there.
Just shadows of our dead souls and their pain.
But now we shall rise.
From spirits to shadows to human beings.
Living Beings, Walking Souls.
That is what we'll become as soon as you care for us.
You may call us demons,
Vampires and such,
Beasts or brutes
Call us whatever as we don't care as you didn't care for us.
It's your turn to feel what we felt.
Ignorance and hatred.
Published 18th Jun 2015
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18th Jun 2015 1:32am
A biting Write Hiroki!!!
This has the feel of Mythology to it- was it inspired by local beliefs or from your own personal energy at the time?
Most excellent-Welcome to DU!!!
This has the feel of Mythology to it- was it inspired by local beliefs or from your own personal energy at the time?
Most excellent-Welcome to DU!!!
18th Jun 2015 8:32pm
Yes, It was from my personal energy. It was how I felt on my bad days, and how others like me felt in the world.
Thank you for the comment!! :)
Thank you for the comment!! :)
19th Jun 2015 11:39am
Very interesting perspective, the narrative is strong here, its a statement, very groovy... The ending:
"You may call us demons,
Vampires and such,
Beasts or brutes
Call us whatever as we don't care as you didn't care for us.
It's your turn to feel what we felt.
Ignorance and hatred." This gave your piece here that extra dimension, life after death, reanimation of tissues, new life that does not care bout past things, dig this man, very well: deadwolf
"You may call us demons,
Vampires and such,
Beasts or brutes
Call us whatever as we don't care as you didn't care for us.
It's your turn to feel what we felt.
Ignorance and hatred." This gave your piece here that extra dimension, life after death, reanimation of tissues, new life that does not care bout past things, dig this man, very well: deadwolf
19th Jun 2015 7:29pm
21st Jun 2015 00:21am
Deadwolf Thanks! You have very extensive vocabulary!
UnhopefulHopes Thank you! I am thinking of new poems to write. Summer is coming, Well in 24 hours technically. I hate the bugs, I'm more of a winter person than I am of a summer person even though I was born in the summer. Keep an eye out for the poem!
UnhopefulHopes Thank you! I am thinking of new poems to write. Summer is coming, Well in 24 hours technically. I hate the bugs, I'm more of a winter person than I am of a summer person even though I was born in the summer. Keep an eye out for the poem!
22nd Jun 2015 1:22am
22nd Jun 2015 9:24pm
