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Sight
My darkness was broken
When we came to be
The loneliness dissipated and
My heart feels free
The haze lifted from my eyes
I can finally see
The soul soars
Though it will not flee
Avenues open up and
Become clear to me
Of where to go and
What can be
You give me sight
A plethora’s galore
You bring me light
And I am saved
Forever more
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
When we came to be
The loneliness dissipated and
My heart feels free
The haze lifted from my eyes
I can finally see
The soul soars
Though it will not flee
Avenues open up and
Become clear to me
Of where to go and
What can be
You give me sight
A plethora’s galore
You bring me light
And I am saved
Forever more
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 16th Jun 2015
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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16th Jun 2015 8:45pm
Xmar82, luv ~ :-*
This poem is incredibly touching, full of love, and tenderness. It is transcendent, resplendent in its clarity of heart's truth. :-*
What a splendid paean you sing, luv, for your love! :-*
This poem is incredibly touching, full of love, and tenderness. It is transcendent, resplendent in its clarity of heart's truth. :-*
What a splendid paean you sing, luv, for your love! :-*
16th Jun 2015 9:00pm
The right person makes their partner want to be better in every aspect. They see what they never could while they were alone. The future becomes bright and glorious. Thank you Savaja for dropping in.
This is truly beautiful, it feels appreciative in the simplicity of such things because many of us know that "to have' is a luxury, in which for some we do not have, so to ever posses it shall be a graceful but memorable love.. sweetly felt
17th Jun 2015 3:21am
Yes appreciate it as a gift and do not neglect it or you will lose it. Thank you for stopping in HowlingWhelms.
17th Jun 2015 3:44am
This was very sweet, xmar. I have been there and its awesome...still there actually. :)
17th Jun 2015 3:55am
You are the envy of so many who are looking for what you have! I am happy for you mysteriouslady. Enjoy the bliss.
17th Jun 2015 4:23am
Thank you, xmar. It took a LOT of blood, sweat, tears, and tons of soul searching to be in this place...from both parties involved...lots of hard work personal and together. I could go on for weeks lol
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