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Libra Rising
The week ahead seems daunting
Mundane tasks piled on the desk
Pompous upper bureaucrats descend
Slapping still more on the stack
A seemingly endless horror
But thoughts of rebellion foment
Dynamite for the office infrastructure
She will emerge triumphant
Vindicated and transformed
A Libra rising by the end of the day.
Mundane tasks piled on the desk
Pompous upper bureaucrats descend
Slapping still more on the stack
A seemingly endless horror
But thoughts of rebellion foment
Dynamite for the office infrastructure
She will emerge triumphant
Vindicated and transformed
A Libra rising by the end of the day.
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Re: Libra Rising
15th Jun 2015 4:43pm
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Re: Libra Rising
Anonymous
15th Jun 2015 4:49pm
Wow, this is a crisp concise fantasy, how to beat the Monday morning doldrums, with somewhat harmonious results.
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15th Jun 2015 9:02pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Jun 2015 5:18pm
15th Jun 2015 5:17pm
heh
sometimes i'm so grateful to be a student... though i won't say no to blowing shite up...
... dig it crowfly
sometimes i'm so grateful to be a student... though i won't say no to blowing shite up...
... dig it crowfly
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15th Jun 2015 9:03pm
Re: Libra Rising
15th Jun 2015 5:54pm
This kind of gets a girl going, Crow. I need to pin this up and reread it several times a day.....
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re: Re: Libra Rising
15th Jun 2015 9:05pm
I'm glad it's worth a read or two Virginia. And delighted to get you going....
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15th Jun 2015 6:09pm
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Re: Libra Rising
15th Jun 2015 8:08pm
Although I didn't quite understand a lot of the words you used in this piece Crow,
I got the gist anyway.
Fine piece you have here my dear!!!
loves always Zazzles xoxoxoxo
(((((((((((((((Thomas))))))))))))))
I got the gist anyway.
Fine piece you have here my dear!!!
loves always Zazzles xoxoxoxo
(((((((((((((((Thomas))))))))))))))
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15th Jun 2015 9:08pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
15th Jun 2015 11:37pm
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re: Re: Libra Rising
16th Jun 2015 2:36am
Re: Libra Rising
16th Jun 2015 3:13am
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
It's always about what's going on in one's head, isn't it? That's more important that any single other thing, ne c'est pas?
I've always found it so... ;-*
It's always about what's going on in one's head, isn't it? That's more important that any single other thing, ne c'est pas?
I've always found it so... ;-*
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16th Jun 2015 4:56pm
C'est vrai. I just wish I had a bit more control of those passing reflections, particularly the dangerous and self-destructive ones. I'm working on it. Thanks Savaja!