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Slay Me!
I burned
sweet words
long ago..
My vocabulary
sheds
fever-sting
warm on your skin..
I watch it grow.
~Now~
I taunt you
with harsh gesture
of body grope,
Dipping to tease
igniting
your hope.
~Demanding~
Slay me
with thick rod!
Spare
hard-rock teasing..
~panting breathless~
Give me
immersed thrust-
~Ram me, relentless~
Make me
wench dripping
to have you.
succumb
succumb
Force raw
scream lust
from the dry throat
of me.
So much like
virgin flesh,
tight to
welcome the
thick spread
of you.
Fever-sting pours,
helpless again..
Nails to thigh
I try.
in lil' lip bite..
I spurn n'burn
inside
puddle amassing
wet-wimper sighs.
I
succumb
to
the seduce
and shatter-cry
around you.
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Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 5:22pm
re: Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 10:26pm
GAWDS JJ..Luvzu man! you get my tummy
with your 'Roar e'ry damnable time! *G
..soo hear you darlin' ;)
smooches fer readin'
~d
with your 'Roar e'ry damnable time! *G
..soo hear you darlin' ;)
smooches fer readin'
~d
Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 6:31pm
re: Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 10:44pm
Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 6:37pm
Gosh babe, I love the pain and pleasurable spectrum you embedded in your pieces.. just as your words brings us closer to that UMPH feeling, with no breaths left or dissolving in a beautiful way.. Muwahs muwahs there & there for this one.
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re: Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 10:49pm
Hot kisses right back m'hawt kitten-kat!
I am in a mood fer sure, luv havin'
you join me!
alwyz love fer u ;)
mwahs
~d
I am in a mood fer sure, luv havin'
you join me!
alwyz love fer u ;)
mwahs
~d
Re: Slay Me!
Anonymous
11th Jun 2015 6:37pm
darksighs,
Circle the wagons, we're surrounded and going down quick! "Relentlessly" HOT!!!
tornado
Circle the wagons, we're surrounded and going down quick! "Relentlessly" HOT!!!
tornado
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re: Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 10:54pm
Rofl sweet man, thx SO much fer stoppin to
see me! Itza *baad tonight, itchy cervix
m'thinks (ha!)
huggs misters, appreciate every visit frm u!
~d
see me! Itza *baad tonight, itchy cervix
m'thinks (ha!)
huggs misters, appreciate every visit frm u!
~d
Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 6:43pm
re: Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 11:09pm
Ha!..So true. Hey, peeps might buy it, yea??
give uz the rights luv ;)
Big-time digg seein' you here, cumz by any time.
laters cutie!
~d
give uz the rights luv ;)
Big-time digg seein' you here, cumz by any time.
laters cutie!
~d
Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 7:17pm
you're one hell of a writer this is seductive genius scorching hot.. with respect Crim
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re: Re: Slay Me!
12th Jun 2015 00:18am
I am soo vera happy you enjoyed & ty so much for gracing my page Crim!
Awesome comment, *smilin fer sure ;)
take care
~d
Awesome comment, *smilin fer sure ;)
take care
~d
Re: Slay Me!
11th Jun 2015 8:07pm
Omgoodness sounds like YOU could slay the very one u want to be slayed by with all that damn passion!!! lol
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re: Re: Slay Me!
12th Jun 2015 00:25am
rofl..I *hv been known fer appetite sir..
ty fer stoppin in sweetie, ur read is
warming & much appreciated ;)
be well!
~d
ty fer stoppin in sweetie, ur read is
warming & much appreciated ;)
be well!
~d
Anonymous
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11th Jun 2015 9:19pm
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re: Re: Slay Me!
Well that's it! I cud *possibly abstain
'til then (maaaybe) or try, if u hafta..?
(will send m'grumpy luvz ur way too, if
he complains)
No swackin' if my damn horny *comes *trampin'
out to <<~~*whole thing? sexy innuendo..eeks!
on accident too! (fake innocent look)
Luvzu all-times Taryn, you spur a gal to keep writing ;)
~d
'til then (maaaybe) or try, if u hafta..?
(will send m'grumpy luvz ur way too, if
he complains)
No swackin' if my damn horny *comes *trampin'
out to <<~~*whole thing? sexy innuendo..eeks!
on accident too! (fake innocent look)
Luvzu all-times Taryn, you spur a gal to keep writing ;)
~d
Re: Slay Me!
Anonymous
11th Jun 2015 9:43pm
"Make me
wench dripping
to have you."
good lawd darling sighs, you're breathing the sweetest flames of desire tonight
wench dripping
to have you."
good lawd darling sighs, you're breathing the sweetest flames of desire tonight
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re: Re: Slay Me!
12th Jun 2015 00:41am
And you, dearest, still give good CJ's..
(comment jobs o'course) eg
Always in m' special list, doll, ty fer
the ever-smiles ;) Flames *are in the air!
mwahs alwyz
~d
(comment jobs o'course) eg
Always in m' special list, doll, ty fer
the ever-smiles ;) Flames *are in the air!
mwahs alwyz
~d
Re: Slay Me!
12th Jun 2015 5:39am
hmmmm
wish I was there
ye sure can rack up the reads....iyam jelly'us
wish I was there
ye sure can rack up the reads....iyam jelly'us
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re: Re: Slay Me!
You gott me bouncin' to see you here,
page warmer!
n'jelly no'..I follow you-(& happy too)
Luv ur worx & shall continue to
entice ur brain..I pounce ever-friendly.
*really..ty's much, grateful to see you
here ;)
be good or write smutties..(grin..*there)
~d
page warmer!
n'jelly no'..I follow you-(& happy too)
Luv ur worx & shall continue to
entice ur brain..I pounce ever-friendly.
*really..ty's much, grateful to see you
here ;)
be good or write smutties..(grin..*there)
~d