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Prisoners of lust (Haiku)
Cuffed to harsh metal
Cries piercing and desperate
At my will they stay
Cries piercing and desperate
At my will they stay
Published 6th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
6th Jun 2015 9:14pm
what is this, the briefest BDSM wannabe awards?
No its the Sexually frustrated wannabe poet award ... Well done you.
I'm guessing you didn't like it... Its a haiku ... The structure is limited ... Your comment could have been more insightful.
I'm guessing you didn't like it... Its a haiku ... The structure is limited ... Your comment could have been more insightful.
7th Jun 2015 11:33pm
7th Jun 2015 11:43pm
