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makeshift
In dreams...
idle hands
grasp for
a ghostly lover
longing
for anothers touch
hovering always out of reach
leaving her heart in disbelief
a makeshift
silent blur
of desire denied
idle hands
grasp for
a ghostly lover
longing
for anothers touch
hovering always out of reach
leaving her heart in disbelief
a makeshift
silent blur
of desire denied
Published 6th Jun 2015
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6th Jun 2015 4:43am
7th Jun 2015 10:56pm
just a fantasy really … thanks for the read and comments JohnFeddeler … always appreciated
6th Jun 2015 10:43am
I always wake up right before I catch him. Nothing quite like waking up frustrated, is there?
7th Jun 2015 10:57pm
6th Jun 2015 4:27pm
the makeshift..albeit in denial of tender longingness, feels like the 'silent blur' is a dreamy extrapolation taking contours of him, his love. This is a spatial poetry in motion, i get dense to break in tears wen such makeshifts i embrace;) tq jemac fr the read x
7th Jun 2015 10:58pm
