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Blow my 'Settle'
Ah~sculpt me
merciful
with iron hands,
and drip me
as mercury
in slow liquid dance.
Mold me then,
with steady thumb.
Slice the silence
in high-pitched
'librium.
Drain my fragile pieces
into bits of dust.
Now blow so gentle darlin'
The 'settle' that used to be us.
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Re: Blow my 'Settle'
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 7:44pm
great write girl:)..fuck settling period, I say; rather be alone cause we all have to die that way anyway rather than settle..in any way that the maniacal world or some neurotic individual would desire of me.
"Drain my fragile pieces into bits of dust" love that..can I have that done?...I want all fragility gone and vitality returned:)...
"Drain my fragile pieces into bits of dust" love that..can I have that done?...I want all fragility gone and vitality returned:)...
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 7:56pm
Oh yes I am..having a miff of a day ;(
Too much stewing time + cranky me = vent x much
To your Q: "..can I have that done?.."
~ha! maaaybe..but I'd have to take my mortar
& pestle to you first. *G's
(purge?..I'z be gentle, kay?)
Sweet thanks fer the stop-in! (always)
~d
Too much stewing time + cranky me = vent x much
To your Q: "..can I have that done?.."
~ha! maaaybe..but I'd have to take my mortar
& pestle to you first. *G's
(purge?..I'z be gentle, kay?)
Sweet thanks fer the stop-in! (always)
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 7:46pm
though since you have it in quotes your meaning is different..either way, it dances on the page, flows like those rivers that always reach the sea..
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Re: Blow my 'Settle'
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 7:46pm
possibly, sorry..
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 7:58pm
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 7:59pm
woo......
eye'm truly impressed.
very few in these parts wit any syntax that grabs me right off
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 8:57pm
You humble me sir! (ty-ty)
With syntax in play, I thank you in *bold ink!!
take care ;)
~d
With syntax in play, I thank you in *bold ink!!
take care ;)
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 8:43pm
i am talking to you. i see your sadness. i feel it with you. it is just you and i here together. tears fall. emotions swell. friends fail and also stand by ready for you to say help me. The sun shines and yet. . . the house is empty. Half your life spent . . . trying. Then next half, trying. trying and crying. How do 30 years together melt into a present of disconnection? You understand me, I know. and yet we fail.
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 9:00pm
'Tis touching verse, you drop upon my page ;)
Sweetest ty's fer the read also!
be well
~d
Sweetest ty's fer the read also!
be well
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 9:01pm
we all have days like this, mine's been dragging for months and as women we're entitled to have these moments and wallow in them...
... you wallow beautifully, with pure finesse. loved this babe xo
... you wallow beautifully, with pure finesse. loved this babe xo
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 9:14pm
Yeppers..wallow & woes always corner n'pounce when I'm 'oblivious (like making coffee) ha!
I spill sumthen most every day in eeks-n-shrieks!
*you've been known to tip m'coffee mug a time or
two also lady (luv those fits of grin)
always thanx to you
~d
I spill sumthen most every day in eeks-n-shrieks!
*you've been known to tip m'coffee mug a time or
two also lady (luv those fits of grin)
always thanx to you
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 9:10pm
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
5th Jun 2015 9:39pm
Aww thank you much, it is always-ever
good to see you droppin' by!
When it rains, it pours more, per my luck
I s'pose ;) grrrz to today.
Appreciate your comment ;)
take care m'dear
~d
good to see you droppin' by!
When it rains, it pours more, per my luck
I s'pose ;) grrrz to today.
Appreciate your comment ;)
take care m'dear
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
6th Jun 2015 00:03am
Man, felt great just reading this, your minds creativity is unlimited... Feels old world soul and wisdom, with new world intelligence and science; can see all the world from there ma friend... : wolf
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re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
6th Jun 2015 3:17am
Thank you much fer warmin' my page hun!
I am much obliged for such a refreshing comment..
Calming, you are & I'm reminded of why I read you!
*G's
rock on mr wolf! ;)
~d
I am much obliged for such a refreshing comment..
Calming, you are & I'm reminded of why I read you!
*G's
rock on mr wolf! ;)
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
6th Jun 2015 3:05am
re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
6th Jun 2015 3:24am
Lady, your eeks are nothin' but cute.
Always appreciate your brain visiting my muse!
(was it beer or tea they had last?) lol.
be well
~d
Always appreciate your brain visiting my muse!
(was it beer or tea they had last?) lol.
be well
~d
Re: Blow my 'Settle'
8th Jun 2015 9:18am
re: Re: Blow my 'Settle'
9th Jun 2015 8:41am
I do try ventin' gentle-like when I can manage
to stifle the flippin' grrz!
Sweet mad-thanx darlin, fer being here!
be wellz ;)
~d