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Daring You To...
Not a moment
forgotten.
I am a glove
to lovers seed.
I open wide
at ten and two,
fulfillment
of your need…
Wrapped tight
in my cradle,
airless hips
rise and fall again-
spin. spin. spin.
Begging
wanton suckle,
drowning 'round
hard skin…
Grinding brutal
(full blood rush)
I tease passion
in dictation thrust.
Deep within
pink pant recess-
Soft muscles lick
head purple crest.
over and over again…
sin. sin. sin.
catching drop by drop.
Daring you
to make me stop…
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Re: Daring You To...
Anonymous
4th Jun 2015 7:39pm
very erotic...love it..gets me to thinking of wanting to sin actually..and i don't usually make comments like this but just curious, would drip drip drip below sin sin sin before catching drop by drop add a little something to it worthwhile?...only you can answer that..love open wide at ten and two...got me glancing at the clock...lol...
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re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 00:04am
anytime a man has started/ended with
"just curious".. I've ended in trouble luv..;)
but *yes that would groove!
(even checked sideways) good input!
ty-ty fer the read hun
mwahs
~d
"just curious".. I've ended in trouble luv..;)
but *yes that would groove!
(even checked sideways) good input!
ty-ty fer the read hun
mwahs
~d
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 9:31pm
lmfao...ur funny too girl..lol..okay, next time I'll word it differently. I just never make suggestions to add things and rarely has anyone done with mine, though I welcome it, at least to ponder, and when I first read it that just instantly popped into my head..and was it good trouble or bad trouble?..lol..I'll just zip it now that I'm already so far in the hole..again, great write
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re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 00:06am
No worries dear Taryn, we gals must make
puddles of our squirm rite? *winks
luvz u
~d
puddles of our squirm rite? *winks
luvz u
~d
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4th Jun 2015 9:39pm
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re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 00:10am
Thanx hunny!
I blame/attribute my virgo.. we tend to pay attention to detail ;)
sweet ty's for stoppin' in (always)
~d
I blame/attribute my virgo.. we tend to pay attention to detail ;)
sweet ty's for stoppin' in (always)
~d
Re: Daring You To...
10 & 2 while the c(l)ock strikes midnight, a daring proposition for a lover to assume the position... who would want to stop the time spinning on your clock? Every passionate hour would sap every ounce of power it would take to resist your heavenly shower. To be taken to Heaven in sin is worth going to Hell for raising my rising purple pleasure pop...
JJ
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re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 00:14am
Aww JJ my man, you melt me to rain like no other
with your hawt-stuff comments. *mwahs
I'm on your clock ;)
much luvz huuny
~d
with your hawt-stuff comments. *mwahs
I'm on your clock ;)
much luvz huuny
~d
re: re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 2:21am
Time's ticking away, feel free to spin my hands as fast as you can...
:)
JJ
:)
JJ
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5th Jun 2015 5:24am
Reminds me of a drunk nite &
nakee Twister!
spinnin'..aaaand *spun
(blamin' you fer that one/only good stuff) n'ty. ;)
~d
nakee Twister!
spinnin'..aaaand *spun
(blamin' you fer that one/only good stuff) n'ty. ;)
~d
Re: Daring You To...
Anonymous
4th Jun 2015 11:38pm
"Soft muscles lick
head purple crest."
we need an ode to that shade of purple and THAT vein... dear lord,
that day'um vein right there... i'm gonna go have a cold shower now
head purple crest."
we need an ode to that shade of purple and THAT vein... dear lord,
that day'um vein right there... i'm gonna go have a cold shower now
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re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 00:26am
Funny feign of innocence, read the
works of your naughty pen gf. hawt!
We should just tell crayola we request
pre-swell purple maybe? I'll think of
better less-n you beat me to it!? lol
sweet-stroke purple? mmm..naw.*G
luvz m'lady
~d
works of your naughty pen gf. hawt!
We should just tell crayola we request
pre-swell purple maybe? I'll think of
better less-n you beat me to it!? lol
sweet-stroke purple? mmm..naw.*G
luvz m'lady
~d
Re: Daring You To...
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 00:48am
No stopping! keep it low and slow, that was a very well written naughty poem. New script with vivid hues. Very nice!
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re: Re: Daring You To...
5th Jun 2015 5:18am
Thanks much sweetie..
Just keepin' track o'time! *G
luvz fer stoppin' for your stop-in ;)
~d
Just keepin' track o'time! *G
luvz fer stoppin' for your stop-in ;)
~d