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Crazies
I do
Who doesn't?
Have the crazies
At times
I mean,
They're a sight
I'm a fright
Is that right?
Hmmm... Not quite.
I'm a sight
They're a fright
THAT might be right.
Oh,
Who cares?
I may
One day
Allay
My fears
Tears
(the kind you weep)
Or are they the kind that gnaw
And shred
Claws ripping
Strips of flesh
...Come peeling off
Oh yeah
Crazies
See?
They lurk beneath
Seeking relief
Every once in awhile
Seeking exit
Out they shriek
No remonstrance from me
Will cause them to flee
Though I wish I could
Shutter them, hood
Cloak
Maybe I'll flee
Run away free
Oh
Right
I can't very well do that, can I
As
They're me...
Who doesn't?
Have the crazies
At times
I mean,
They're a sight
I'm a fright
Is that right?
Hmmm... Not quite.
I'm a sight
They're a fright
THAT might be right.
Oh,
Who cares?
I may
One day
Allay
My fears
Tears
(the kind you weep)
Or are they the kind that gnaw
And shred
Claws ripping
Strips of flesh
...Come peeling off
Oh yeah
Crazies
See?
They lurk beneath
Seeking relief
Every once in awhile
Seeking exit
Out they shriek
No remonstrance from me
Will cause them to flee
Though I wish I could
Shutter them, hood
Cloak
Maybe I'll flee
Run away free
Oh
Right
I can't very well do that, can I
As
They're me...
Written by
Savaja
Published 3rd Jun 2015
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Re: Crazies
3rd Jun 2015 3:08am
Wow. I seriously relate to this lately. I like the flow of this, and this really just sums up my brain currently. I like this a lot.
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re: Re: Crazies
Ahhh, sammy4444, luv ~ :-*
I am feeling for you, deeply and earnestly, if you are here with me, luv, in this. Tis a morass, eh? :-p
Ah well... I am quite certain it could be worse. I know of a certainty it could be for I've been there in that hellish place where it's worse too and glad am I not to be a-visiting again just yet...
Thank you for your praise of this piece and its flow. I am glad if you're in it, it spoke to you for mayhap it offers hope. I've found betimes it helps to know that it is not true that no one can possibly understand, comprehend what's going on, ne c'est pas? :-*
I get it, luv. Others do too. Not so alone, after all. :-*
Meh, I'll shut the up now, eh? ;-p
I am feeling for you, deeply and earnestly, if you are here with me, luv, in this. Tis a morass, eh? :-p
Ah well... I am quite certain it could be worse. I know of a certainty it could be for I've been there in that hellish place where it's worse too and glad am I not to be a-visiting again just yet...
Thank you for your praise of this piece and its flow. I am glad if you're in it, it spoke to you for mayhap it offers hope. I've found betimes it helps to know that it is not true that no one can possibly understand, comprehend what's going on, ne c'est pas? :-*
I get it, luv. Others do too. Not so alone, after all. :-*
Meh, I'll shut the up now, eh? ;-p
Re: Crazies
3rd Jun 2015 3:30am
re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 8:02am
HadesRising, luv ~ :-*
I rather adore this comment. You and your crazies are welcome here anytime, luv. :-*
Me and mine thank you all very, very much. :-*
(so rare they're all in agreement... ;-p)
I rather adore this comment. You and your crazies are welcome here anytime, luv. :-*
Me and mine thank you all very, very much. :-*
(so rare they're all in agreement... ;-p)
re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 8:11am
Re: Crazies
3rd Jun 2015 4:28am
WOW I love this twist of thoughts!
Savaja! u is the queen!!!
love this!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxo
Savaja! u is the queen!!!
love this!!!!
Zazzles xoxoxo
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re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 7:12pm
Zazzles, luv ~ :-*
I rather adore you! And, if I'm the queen, then I'm at your feet, Empress. :-*
Love You, you exuberant whirlwind of splendor!
I rather adore you! And, if I'm the queen, then I'm at your feet, Empress. :-*
Love You, you exuberant whirlwind of splendor!
re: re: Re: Crazies
15th Jun 2015 8:33am
Re: Crazies
3rd Jun 2015 5:14am
emotion, chemical imbalance, who knows. the human conundrum is so complex...
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re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 7:51pm
JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
In this, once again I find you indubitably accurate.
We are comprehensive mixtures of complexities: emotions, imbalances, hormonal cocktails... ;-*
In this, once again I find you indubitably accurate.
We are comprehensive mixtures of complexities: emotions, imbalances, hormonal cocktails... ;-*
Re: Crazies
3rd Jun 2015 6:37pm
Ooo, heck yes!..no words just pleading guilty unto. For we all are, regardless what the judging say. & I know it gets deeper than
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re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 8:48pm
Ahhh, Noire HowlingWhelms, luv ~ :-*
Your concurrence and acknowledgment of our common human condition betimes is rather heartening. :-*
We all struggle along...
Your concurrence and acknowledgment of our common human condition betimes is rather heartening. :-*
We all struggle along...
Re: Crazies
4th Jun 2015 5:06am
re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 8:51pm
Ahhh, xmar82, luv ~ :-*
You've the right of it here. :-p At least, we continue to struggle, eh? ;-*
You've the right of it here. :-p At least, we continue to struggle, eh? ;-*
Re: Crazies
4th Jun 2015 6:52am
Bona fide style from a like mind.
Emotional depth and breadth herein.
Splendid assembly, Savaja.
xo
C.
Emotional depth and breadth herein.
Splendid assembly, Savaja.
xo
C.
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re: Re: Crazies
6th Jun 2015 8:56pm
VegasPoet, luv ~ :-*
You do seduce me even here, even in the midst of my treading the skirts of insanity's inanities. ;-p
You are formidable, indeed... :-*
Thank you, luv. Thank you.
You do seduce me even here, even in the midst of my treading the skirts of insanity's inanities. ;-p
You are formidable, indeed... :-*
Thank you, luv. Thank you.
21st Jun 2015 12:12pm
nice job here, lady. a really good grasp of words and flow of such: pleasant like, playful even.
good stuff, Miss
keep shinnin'
good stuff, Miss
keep shinnin'
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re:
21st Jun 2015 12:42pm
Ah, CraicDealer, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much. I am glad you found somewhat lyrical and pleasing in it, especially considering the rather daunting subject. ;-p
Again, luv, thank you. :-*
Thank you very much. I am glad you found somewhat lyrical and pleasing in it, especially considering the rather daunting subject. ;-p
Again, luv, thank you. :-*