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It Was You
Amidst the fog
I see a face
Becoming clearer now
Soft as lace
Misty, yet bright
Like the morning dew
I cling to the moment
Willing it to be you
The slightest touch
Glimpses of truth
My burning senses
Tell me it’s you
I feel the intense
Warmth of your skin
Yield to emotions
Passion swelling within
A feverish rush
Then a fleeting sigh
As I catch my breath
My thoughts soar high
Growing faster
We rush together
Embrace in love
Whispering forever
But then I awake to tingles
Remnants of dreams come true
Pulsing through my body
I smile – knowing it was you…
I see a face
Becoming clearer now
Soft as lace
Misty, yet bright
Like the morning dew
I cling to the moment
Willing it to be you
The slightest touch
Glimpses of truth
My burning senses
Tell me it’s you
I feel the intense
Warmth of your skin
Yield to emotions
Passion swelling within
A feverish rush
Then a fleeting sigh
As I catch my breath
My thoughts soar high
Growing faster
We rush together
Embrace in love
Whispering forever
But then I awake to tingles
Remnants of dreams come true
Pulsing through my body
I smile – knowing it was you…
Published 3rd Jun 2015
| Edited 26th Apr 2017
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7th Jun 2015 6:00am
I like the fact that you keep the tense in the present. Often we me I start a poem in the present and then end up writing it in the past.
This has pleasant feel much like the sounds of a good saxophone player, whose tones immediately make the day easier to deal with
This has pleasant feel much like the sounds of a good saxophone player, whose tones immediately make the day easier to deal with
7th Jun 2015 11:29am
Connections of the soul are soo rare these days,
you have captured it well.
Luv your whispered lines, a caress upon the page.
Enjoyed much ;)
~d
you have captured it well.
Luv your whispered lines, a caress upon the page.
Enjoyed much ;)
~d
