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My Judgement Day
I need to make a decision,
before i loose this adrenaline.
there's to much blood pumping through me
to pass up this golden opportunity.
The edge of this blade,
find me serenity,
take from me
my identity.
Free me,
from all that causes pain.
Enjoy the silence,
give it space.
In this world I'm out of place,
but this blade,
I more than embrace.
It will take me some place far away,
a place with no reckoning,
my judgement day.
-Quentin knight
before i loose this adrenaline.
there's to much blood pumping through me
to pass up this golden opportunity.
The edge of this blade,
find me serenity,
take from me
my identity.
Free me,
from all that causes pain.
Enjoy the silence,
give it space.
In this world I'm out of place,
but this blade,
I more than embrace.
It will take me some place far away,
a place with no reckoning,
my judgement day.
-Quentin knight
Published 2nd Jun 2015
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2nd Jun 2015 8:07pm
These words sunk into my pores, something that is a universal language for most of us. Understood hun
2nd Jun 2015 8:30pm
thank you, what a great way to put it, universal yeah i agree entirely. i dont feel so alone when you put it like that
2nd Jun 2015 8:50pm
3rd Jun 2015 4:36am
'In this world I'm out of place,
but this blade,
I more than embrace. ' ~ tragic stuff , which is made beautiful due to your descriptions and use of words - paints a clear vision c: your work is fantastic, keep it up ! :D
but this blade,
I more than embrace. ' ~ tragic stuff , which is made beautiful due to your descriptions and use of words - paints a clear vision c: your work is fantastic, keep it up ! :D
