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TWO HAIKUS
NO ESCAPE[/font]
Once green leaves plummet
desiccated of purpose
thus all wilts and dies[/font]
NIGHT SHIFT[/font]
Skeletal trees shake
headstones topple and in two break
dirt flies the dead rise[/font]
Once green leaves plummet
desiccated of purpose
thus all wilts and dies[/font]
NIGHT SHIFT[/font]
Skeletal trees shake
headstones topple and in two break
dirt flies the dead rise[/font]
Published 2nd Jun 2015
| Edited 12th Jun 2015
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2nd Jun 2015 8:06pm
2nd Jun 2015 8:09pm
Thank you Tommie! I'm usually used to giving tingles so this is quite a departure for me :)
2nd Jun 2015 8:14pm
I like the second one best. Nothing like a midnight cemetery with ancient gravestones and trees extending their branches in welcome. Stone angels that will have nothing to do with me when I waken. Memento mori...
2nd Jun 2015 8:35pm
Thank you Crow! For me, the Dr. Who weeping angels episodes ruined angelic statuary for life. These pieces are a departure from my steamy stuff...they were fun to write. Now I expect to read two from you.
2nd Jun 2015 9:06pm
Perfect absolutely fresh Gahda!
I love Haikus and you captured them with flair!
Love
Zazzles xoxox
I love Haikus and you captured them with flair!
Love
Zazzles xoxox
2nd Jun 2015 9:08pm
Thank you Zazzles! I too love haiku. It is, in my estimation, one of the most powerful forms of poetry...to have great impact using just 17 syllables is an amazing thing.
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 3:30pm
well now, this a rather macabre for you, cher but i approve wholeheartedly your wondrous noir approach to such grave matters
tres belle
tres belle
3rd Jun 2015 4:01pm
Thank you Katja. I think too often about death...I write so much erotic because I feel so alive when I do so...in the words of Marvin Gaye, "Sexual Healing." :)
